Death's Sadness
A sad day.121 total reviews
Comment from Piggies Grandma
Hello boomachicka, your poem is cleverly written and very well thought out. Each word was very carefully chosen.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Hello boomachicka, your poem is cleverly written and very well thought out. Each word was very carefully chosen.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from tomprato
I appreciate the thought and the feeling.
But the title needs to be corrected. It is Death's Sadness or rather, The Sadness of Death. You spell Sadness with a single d.
'All the world' deeply saddened. Wow! I don't think all the world knows even about the death of great men. What is news in America is boredom in Asia and ignorance in Africa. We all live in different worlds.
What was 'the greatness lost'? Who is the person who died? Was it a father? Is it a great leader of the masses? I need to see the obituary columns.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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I appreciate the thought and the feeling.
But the title needs to be corrected. It is Death's Sadness or rather, The Sadness of Death. You spell Sadness with a single d.
'All the world' deeply saddened. Wow! I don't think all the world knows even about the death of great men. What is news in America is boredom in Asia and ignorance in Africa. We all live in different worlds.
What was 'the greatness lost'? Who is the person who died? Was it a father? Is it a great leader of the masses? I need to see the obituary columns.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Fixed. Thank you!
Comment from ksherwoodrn
Wondering who this was written for as I read it..love it when a few words can tell a story without getting bogged down with extras...kathleen
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Wondering who this was written for as I read it..love it when a few words can tell a story without getting bogged down with extras...kathleen
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from amarherig14
A loss reaps our heart apart.Only time And faith will heal the wound.It seems to be the death of a very well known person.Good write.NO errors found.Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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A loss reaps our heart apart.Only time And faith will heal the wound.It seems to be the death of a very well known person.Good write.NO errors found.Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from Janie King
I'm not sure who died today or if this is just to cover any one. I've not heard any news so it could be anyone. This say a lot in a few short words. God bless.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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I'm not sure who died today or if this is just to cover any one. I've not heard any news so it could be anyone. This say a lot in a few short words. God bless.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from ernesto escarro
Death Sadness
In the absence of celebrity and any known figure for world concern, the presentation in spite of its brevity is clearly telling poets and writing what the message co notes. Thanks. I rate this 5
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Death Sadness
In the absence of celebrity and any known figure for world concern, the presentation in spite of its brevity is clearly telling poets and writing what the message co notes. Thanks. I rate this 5
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
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You are welcome. You got it.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Haiku excellent, it is the death of a person and associated pain and sadness that accompanies the funeral. The images are very expressive. Good luck and congratulations on a job well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Haiku excellent, it is the death of a person and associated pain and sadness that accompanies the funeral. The images are very expressive. Good luck and congratulations on a job well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from Fiona Hymn
A very poignant write. So much emotion packed into this short verse. The imagery that is created is very heart touching. A poweruful write. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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A very poignant write. So much emotion packed into this short verse. The imagery that is created is very heart touching. A poweruful write. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from SoldierPoet
There are many ways to say good bye. It is an emotional time and wording it right can be difficult as well. You did a very good job with this one.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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There are many ways to say good bye. It is an emotional time and wording it right can be difficult as well. You did a very good job with this one.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Nicely done.
It pulled and gave a sadness even though the loss was not my own.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest...
Maureen
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Nicely done.
It pulled and gave a sadness even though the loss was not my own.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest...
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!
