Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

What a terrific way to invite the sun into your day and life at that moment. Simply having the conversation and perhaps she might acquiesce and join you. Lovely artwork and perfect for the tome. Jean

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Jean, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Nice, Brooke! I sure hope she keeps coming back. It snowed here, today. We have about two inches down, but it's still snowing. Too soon for me. Yikes!

Loved your presentation with the artwork and the gold on black background. Nice work, Brooke.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Adrienne, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Very clever, fun and entertaining plays on words and phrases, Brooke.

Excellent personification in your chat with the sun, who seems very friendly and understanding.

Of course, if you wish to avoid her boasting, just keep catching planes to stay ahead of her, and to avoid her eternal show-offy sunrises. ;-)

Nice one.

Best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Ray, thank you for the laugh and the review, my witty friend :-) B rooke

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Beautiful! I love the word picture you paint and the beautiful description of the sun's garb, The rhyme and rhythm are smooth and even. How enjoyable this is to read!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi Brooke I enjoyed your poem very much although I stumbled on line 5. I personally would write " for you have asked politely." I like the 7,6,7,6 syllable count and have coincidentally just posted a poem in this count. Very enjoyable!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Wendy. I'll take another look at that line :-) Brooke

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

And that she will, poet. Np matter if the clouds cover the universe, she will always shine somewhere. Well done Brooke, Appreciate the poem. Blessings

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Dave Russell

Exceptional

I know that I keep sending sixes your way, but I can never seem to find a five star performance in anything you write. I loved the personification of the sun all the way through the poem.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Dave, thank you so much, my friend, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from donnadiann

Excellent

Good expressions to describe the sun. Interesting personification, and rhyming. Good art used. Well worded and a different twist on the sun.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

donnadiann, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Brooke very unique poem about the sun and how you invited and the sun's reply

I, the Sun, must set.

I'll try to come tomorrow,
for now that we are friends,
I know the way to find you
whenever Nighttime ends."

Gert

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Gert, thanks so much :-) Brooke

reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Nov-2014

smiles and you are welcome

Comment from sunnilicious

Exceptional

Creative story in a poem. It was enjoyable to read because you set a nice lyrical tone. Great flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice visual imagery too. Fantastic work.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, sunnilicious, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke