My Friend's a Jack-O'-Lantern
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/7/6102 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
Oh, what darling pictures of Sawyer. He's so cute in all of them. Your poem was well written, like always, and was a very interesting read.
Kat
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Oh, what darling pictures of Sawyer. He's so cute in all of them. Your poem was well written, like always, and was a very interesting read.
Kat
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
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Kat, thanks so much :-) It's hard to believe he's almost two and a half :-) Brooke
Comment from trimple
Aw, this is so sweet! Oh my how Sawyer has grown into a very handsome little man :)
I particularly enjoyed..
He tames the Venus fly trap
to make a rose's bud,
and pulls the fangs from vampires,
so they can draw no blood.
Such a lovely message that your grandson will protect his nanny:)
Another great poem Brooke.
kind regards
tracey :)
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Aw, this is so sweet! Oh my how Sawyer has grown into a very handsome little man :)
I particularly enjoyed..
He tames the Venus fly trap
to make a rose's bud,
and pulls the fangs from vampires,
so they can draw no blood.
Such a lovely message that your grandson will protect his nanny:)
Another great poem Brooke.
kind regards
tracey :)
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Tracey - don't let Sawyer hear you call him a little man. The other day his daddy said to him - I remember when you were just a baby, and now you're a little kid. I am not a little kid, Sawyer replied. I am a big kid LOL :-) Brooke
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lol
Aw, bless his cottons :)