Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Love whimsy, love this keeper of a photo! He's going to love this when he's a teenager! Poor Horatio, exchanging literary bliss...for a kiss! Blessings...Judy

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

Judy, thank you so much :-) We have so many pictures he is going to kill us for come his teen years. LOL Brooke :-)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OH Brooke, LMBO....look at the look on Sawyers face....and Horatio my have had many plans...but Sawyer doesn't look like he was ready for this kiss...LOL...what a guy....I so love his pictures...so many different expressions...love this Brooke...a wonderful poem...and a great picture...Luff Linda xxoo love

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 12-Jul-2014

always welcome Brooke...luff

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
Yet another ver charming poem to your credit. Those kisses can certainly distract one. As always, beautiful meter and plenty of smiles--Ted

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

Ted, so glad you enjoyed. Thank you, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It does not look as if Sawyer has control. (LOL) This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

Thanks, Charlie, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 10-Jul-2014

You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie.

Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

How cute, adorable, great in words and picture! It seems that even a pleasant interruption like the one shown is not presently appreciated by young Mr. Sawyer...but it will be, one day. :) Dennis

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

Dennis, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

The look on his face is terrifying like he didn't want a kiss from her.
The write is precious as all others you do. I thank you dear Brooke for sharing once again.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014

Angel Debbie, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

What a lovely light-hearted piece about Horatio and the interruption to his planned peaceful day.

Very strong rhyming and 8/6/8/6 rhythm bounce this along sweetly to the somewhat philosophical conclusion.

Steve

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

Thanks so much, Steve :-) Brooke

Comment from Bina1

Excellent

What a delight this is, and the photo is just magical! Kids, are they not the best the world has to offer? Thanks for sharing, brought a smile to my day!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

How much I look forward to your delightful poetry! You didn't disappoint me
another poem that is such a delight to read you represent the child so well
that it takes a bit to fully appreciate the important philosophical message that is always delivered. Another delicious picture... Smiles. Pili

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 11-Jul-2014

You very welcome. Smiles . Pili

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

You almost had the perfect 8/6 8/6 meter
However, you did write a beautiful whimsical poem that children would enjoy reading.
As usual sawyer stars
Good use of the abcb rhyming scheme

also with some alliteration

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke