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The Edge of Convenience

multiverse unity

165 total reviews 
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
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I love your poem. The beautiful imagery and presentation were perfect for this piece. Your comments at the end provided added insight into your work. I too would love to live as you described. Well done and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and sharing your thoughts Brenda. I strive to lead by example and to make positive impressions on the world in hopes, one day, a peace of this nature may exist. Best wishes to you.

    Take care,
    Opal Rose
Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, I enjoyed reading this free style poem, and I found it very well written. As I can see you have just arrived to this site. A warm welcome to you. Looking forward to read more of your work. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for the review and warm welcome Ulla. I appreciate your words shared. Best wishes to you!

    Respectfully,
    Opal Rose
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
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What an exceptional free verse poem, keep writing you're doing so well i wish i had a six star rating for you it would be well deserved

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for such a nice review Abby. Your words elate me. Take care and best wishes to you.

    Sincerely,
    Opal Rose
Comment from amada
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This is and inspiring idea, dear writer. In your lines you woke up a a new and revived sense of belonging... I like the wonderful idea of a multiuniverse. Best wishes to you in this memorial Day.

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Thank you kindly Amada for such a nice review to read. Best wishes to you as well.
    Take care.

    Sincerely,
    Opal Rose
Comment from Mastery
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Welcome aboard FS, Opal. (Pretty name) I know you will enjoy the site. If can be of any help to you please let me know Your poem is so original, I found myself reading it two and three times in order to understand its meaning. I enjoyed it immensely. : ) Bob

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Hello Bob,

    Thank you for such a kind review and warm welcome. I am thoroughly happy you enjoyed the poem so much. Take care and best wishes.

    Sincerely,
    Opal Rose
Comment from QC Poet
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Yes it would be nice to Live in a Galaxy of Acceptance. We have So much trouble just living with each other here on Mother Earth.
Unfortunately we are already arming our space zones too.
Good Luck in the Free Verse contest. Blessings and May the Force be with you.

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    And also with you WC Poet.
    I have faith for our future and strive to help breathe peace into existence with prayers and the LOA. Best wishes to you.

    Sincerely,
    Opal Rose
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Opal Rose your free verse poem
The Edge of Convenience your free verse is unique, and in another, time someday we all can live in harmony and find peace.
Gert

 Comment Written 24-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Hello Gert,

    Thank you for the review. I look forward to the time in which we do leave in such peace and harmony. Take care and best wishes.

    Sincerely,
    Opal Rose
reply by Gert sherwood on 26-May-2020
    you are welcome Opal Rose
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are deep, interesting and creative. The words of
this poem convey harmony and unity in our world. I pondered on these
words and found our best way to encourage this is by example. I liked
the message in this poem. Hope you are having a great weekend!

 Comment Written 24-May-2020

Comment from Alchera
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Well written and utopistic thoughtful provocative because as in earth also among different galaxies peace will never reign even if control and governed by one only Lord. Great work!

 Comment Written 24-May-2020

Comment from bluedragon776
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This is a really cool. This gets the imagination going. I like the idea of parallel universes. Reminds me of the 90s Sci-fi show: "Sliders." Have you seen it? If not, check it out!

 Comment Written 24-May-2020

reply by the author on 24-May-2020
    Hey bluedragon776,

    I am happy you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for the review! I do not recall ever having seen the show. I am intrigued. Thanks for sharing! Take care and best wishes.

    Sincerely,
    Opal Rose