I Found a Missing Sunbeam
quatrains in abcb rhyme146 total reviews
Comment from IndianaIrish
Your poem is a sunshiny delight, Brooke. Is Sawyer looking forward to school? I'm thinking he'll love this new chance for adventure and learning. I bet he'll be a sunbeam in the classroom.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Your poem is a sunshiny delight, Brooke. Is Sawyer looking forward to school? I'm thinking he'll love this new chance for adventure and learning. I bet he'll be a sunbeam in the classroom.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) Well, his parents and I have all played it up, and he got his very first lunch box to take the first day, so right now he's excited. Who knows how he'll react when his mommy drives him there are then turns to leave the room without him. LOL He's gone to gym class and music class and art class and swim class before, but they were all ones where Mommy stayed. :-) She and I are both nervous wrecks :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
"the sun that's beaming from your eyes
each time you smile at me. "
i love these last lines! the poem really made me smile! it's funny how the sun reflects us, makes people happy:) like this poem made me!
thannk you for sharing dear brooke!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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"the sun that's beaming from your eyes
each time you smile at me. "
i love these last lines! the poem really made me smile! it's funny how the sun reflects us, makes people happy:) like this poem made me!
thannk you for sharing dear brooke!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWHARGIS
Great poem. I love the energy and sublte message of how beautifula nd moving the smile is. Nice rhythm and flow. Cute delievery.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Great poem. I love the energy and sublte message of how beautifula nd moving the smile is. Nice rhythm and flow. Cute delievery.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Gretchen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tfawcus
A delightful poem to celebrate a charming smile. I do like the way this one develops, with the single spark of life detaching from the sun to animate Sawyer's smile. We all have that within us, but it doesn't always shine out quite so cheerfully. I've always rather liked that term of endearment, describing a child as 'my little ray of sunshine'. You have constructed a most appealing poem from it, taking it literally, as a child might do. Good luck to the little fellow as he starts the new adventure of school!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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A delightful poem to celebrate a charming smile. I do like the way this one develops, with the single spark of life detaching from the sun to animate Sawyer's smile. We all have that within us, but it doesn't always shine out quite so cheerfully. I've always rather liked that term of endearment, describing a child as 'my little ray of sunshine'. You have constructed a most appealing poem from it, taking it literally, as a child might do. Good luck to the little fellow as he starts the new adventure of school!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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tfawcus, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Wow! Already going to school... They do grow up way too fast. Why it was just yesterday you were telling us about his birth or was that the day before yesterday??
Very well written as always, Buck
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Wow! Already going to school... They do grow up way too fast. Why it was just yesterday you were telling us about his birth or was that the day before yesterday??
Very well written as always, Buck
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Buck, thank you so much. It was 28 months ago - they send kids to school young nowadays. :-) Broke
Comment from Nosha17
He will have much to relate after being at school, how exciting for him. Lovely lines of verse in praise of our beautiful Earth and sun. Great way for kids to learn about our Universe. Lovely picture and most enjoyable as always. Faye
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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He will have much to relate after being at school, how exciting for him. Lovely lines of verse in praise of our beautiful Earth and sun. Great way for kids to learn about our Universe. Lovely picture and most enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Faye, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
AWWWWWWWW! Cut that out! You know I can't resist 'saying' "aw" when your poem and picture are just too sweet, and it makes me look like I'm unable to articulate my feelings! (LOL) What a brilliant poem, Brooke - do I need to say it? SIXES!!!! MORE NEEDED!!! This is just wonderful imagery, my friend! I'm going to be seeing sunbeams now...:0)
***************************Brilliant! (pun intended!)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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AWWWWWWWW! Cut that out! You know I can't resist 'saying' "aw" when your poem and picture are just too sweet, and it makes me look like I'm unable to articulate my feelings! (LOL) What a brilliant poem, Brooke - do I need to say it? SIXES!!!! MORE NEEDED!!! This is just wonderful imagery, my friend! I'm going to be seeing sunbeams now...:0)
***************************Brilliant! (pun intended!)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Dawn, thank you so very much :-) I absolutely had to write a poem to go with this picture, one of my all-time favorites. Brooke :-)
Comment from Ben Colder
They can get away so quick. My Jacob started too. Both of these boys is about to show their grandparents a little something to remember. Well done Brooke. Blessings to all.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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They can get away so quick. My Jacob started too. Both of these boys is about to show their grandparents a little something to remember. Well done Brooke. Blessings to all.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Darkhorse555
the title all by it self shone straight of the screen brooke accompanied such a heartwarming picture very beautifully penned piece dear friend
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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the title all by it self shone straight of the screen brooke accompanied such a heartwarming picture very beautifully penned piece dear friend
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Darkhorse, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from madhatter1977
This is a great poem in a form I haven't tried before or knew about (abcb). It works very well for me and Sawyer looks full of beans in your photo! I like the message about sunbeams being both people (metaphor)and shining on us all (literal)! Great poem, Brooke. Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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This is a great poem in a form I haven't tried before or knew about (abcb). It works very well for me and Sawyer looks full of beans in your photo! I like the message about sunbeams being both people (metaphor)and shining on us all (literal)! Great poem, Brooke. Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke! Have a great weekend. Pete
