A Funny Face
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6158 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
Brooke, beautifully rhymed on this one - words just slip off the tongue.
As fun to read as this was, anytime Sawyer and mum want to cheer me up - we can Skype or Facetime. Their choice... Jean
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Brooke, beautifully rhymed on this one - words just slip off the tongue.
As fun to read as this was, anytime Sawyer and mum want to cheer me up - we can Skype or Facetime. Their choice... Jean
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Jean, thank you so very much :-) Brooke :-)
Comment from janalma
I loved this one. I don't know if you realize, Brooke, but I, and I'll bet others, sit here at the computer and read your poems, look at the pics you post and grin like monkeys. I'm glad no one can see me. Lol. Good thoughts here and as usual, it flows and rhymes so well. My favorite line, I think, is "and peas are on the plate," I have to agree with the little kids--yuck.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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I loved this one. I don't know if you realize, Brooke, but I, and I'll bet others, sit here at the computer and read your poems, look at the pics you post and grin like monkeys. I'm glad no one can see me. Lol. Good thoughts here and as usual, it flows and rhymes so well. My favorite line, I think, is "and peas are on the plate," I have to agree with the little kids--yuck.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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janalma, thank you :-) to this day I don't eat them - I even pick them out of things like chicken pot pie LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Debbie
Love this cute write. It flows quick and easy.
The rhymes are great.
The picture is precious. Brooke I wish I had your knack for popping words out so well.
GREAT WRITE!!!
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Love this cute write. It flows quick and easy.
The rhymes are great.
The picture is precious. Brooke I wish I had your knack for popping words out so well.
GREAT WRITE!!!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Angel Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tbacha58
when go carts crash and dreams are dashed
and troubles just abound,
a funny face is all it takes
to turn a day around.
When I read your name, I quickly see Sawyer, and I tip my mouse on your poem, this one Brooke, is outstanding, just adorable, that boy is a hit, he has a future, God bless him. The variable faces he did came out so so cute, and extremely strong. Beautiful, when he grows up, it will be wonderful for him to watch all his amazing pictures of when he was young. Love hi. Love Terry xoxo
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when go carts crash and dreams are dashed
and troubles just abound,
a funny face is all it takes
to turn a day around.
When I read your name, I quickly see Sawyer, and I tip my mouse on your poem, this one Brooke, is outstanding, just adorable, that boy is a hit, he has a future, God bless him. The variable faces he did came out so so cute, and extremely strong. Beautiful, when he grows up, it will be wonderful for him to watch all his amazing pictures of when he was young. Love hi. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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terry, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
Another perfectly rhymed poem from the master of rhyme. I love the way you take such a simple thing and turn it into such an entertaining piece. A great series of pictures too, Pete
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Another perfectly rhymed poem from the master of rhyme. I love the way you take such a simple thing and turn it into such an entertaining piece. A great series of pictures too, Pete
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWHARGIS
I thik if we had ten sixes a week, I would still run out with these wonderful poems. I love the illfated things and the peas on the plate was a killer line. I love peas, and I think I am theonly person I know that does. Great job, once again, turning the mundane into fun.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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I thik if we had ten sixes a week, I would still run out with these wonderful poems. I love the illfated things and the peas on the plate was a killer line. I love peas, and I think I am theonly person I know that does. Great job, once again, turning the mundane into fun.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Gretchen :-)
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
What cute pictures of your daughter and grandson. I know a person always feel better if they make funny faces and laugh at themselves. When I'm feeling down or aching a lot I make faces in the medicine cabinet mirror until I laugh. May be dumb, but it works.
Kat
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke,
What cute pictures of your daughter and grandson. I know a person always feel better if they make funny faces and laugh at themselves. When I'm feeling down or aching a lot I make faces in the medicine cabinet mirror until I laugh. May be dumb, but it works.
Kat
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Kat, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Drew Delaney
Such a splendid poem, Brooke. You are just a born poet, I think. No matter what you write, it reads so smoothly and lately some humour to entice the reader. Enjoyed this so much.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Such a splendid poem, Brooke. You are just a born poet, I think. No matter what you write, it reads so smoothly and lately some humour to entice the reader. Enjoyed this so much.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Drew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Brooke
It is amazing how much joy one can get from watching a child making faces. Your poem is a delight as well
Have a superb weekend
Bear
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Hey there Brooke
It is amazing how much joy one can get from watching a child making faces. Your poem is a delight as well
Have a superb weekend
Bear
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Bear, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sharon-Yvette
I love this poem. It uses very descriptive imagery to convey the message that when things in life are turned upside down, the funny face can turn it around. I especially like the variety of descriptions that can all go wrong sometimes in one day it seems. Great job!
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I love this poem. It uses very descriptive imagery to convey the message that when things in life are turned upside down, the funny face can turn it around. I especially like the variety of descriptions that can all go wrong sometimes in one day it seems. Great job!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Sharon, thank you so much :-) Brooke
