Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
So glad to read your lovely work once again. These had me pondering and though I'm not up to par yet I could enjoy these in lighter way than I normally review. Like seeing the cherry lollipop before the first lick.
Wonderful as ever dear One.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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So glad to read your lovely work once again. These had me pondering and though I'm not up to par yet I could enjoy these in lighter way than I normally review. Like seeing the cherry lollipop before the first lick.
Wonderful as ever dear One.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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OOOOOOh Maureen I am so glad to see you girl. Great going and just rest your weary bones girl. I love you so very much. Nathan says thank you too girl. Sigh ....
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Rhythmic in the extreme and beautifully crafted. I cannot criticism this more
Positively. A dreamy picture to celebrate.
A sixer is inevitable.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Rhythmic in the extreme and beautifully crafted. I cannot criticism this more
Positively. A dreamy picture to celebrate.
A sixer is inevitable.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Oh so wonderful this review is. Thanks from the bottom of our collective hearts.
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my pleasure
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Smile you.
Comment from THE FREAK
Loved it. Loved every bit. Wow!!!
This has to be your finest work... i really mean this G. What an exposure of true emotions... just... wow.
I cannot wait to what tops this...
Keep it going for the sake of humanity
All the best
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Loved it. Loved every bit. Wow!!!
This has to be your finest work... i really mean this G. What an exposure of true emotions... just... wow.
I cannot wait to what tops this...
Keep it going for the sake of humanity
All the best
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Nathan and I thank you so much FREAK. What a wonderful review. Sigh.
Comment from Janilou
In purest passion were our spirits wed,
beside a lake of dreams we made our bed.
What an absolutely beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it from start to finish. Can't think of a thing to suggest. It's simply beautiful. Well done.
Jan
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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In purest passion were our spirits wed,
beside a lake of dreams we made our bed.
What an absolutely beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it from start to finish. Can't think of a thing to suggest. It's simply beautiful. Well done.
Jan
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thanks from both Nathan and me Jan. We sure do appreciate such a wonderful review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Pam,
I don't know who Nathan Blackthorn is but the two of you have penned a most beautiful and compelling Crown of Sonnets. Your well chosen words are lovely and each line is well composed. You have used excellent alliteration and enjambments that let your words fall down the page with ease. I love every word....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Hi Pam,
I don't know who Nathan Blackthorn is but the two of you have penned a most beautiful and compelling Crown of Sonnets. Your well chosen words are lovely and each line is well composed. You have used excellent alliteration and enjambments that let your words fall down the page with ease. I love every word....blessings, chey
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Nathan says you know him Chey. He and I both thank you for a glorious review of this one.
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I do know him? Does he use a pen name or have I lost what is left of my mind?
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It's a pen name Chey and you have reviewed him and he you. LOL. It'll come to you.
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okey dokey!
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LOL.
Comment from Honeysuckle1876
WOW!!!!!!
Simply amazing. I have the hardest time just writing one sonnet. Here we have seven. What a wonderful story you have written about love and living life together and all the joy that it can bring. I am not very good with sonnets, but I didn't see and mistakes. This is a great work of art.
Great job
Angie
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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WOW!!!!!!
Simply amazing. I have the hardest time just writing one sonnet. Here we have seven. What a wonderful story you have written about love and living life together and all the joy that it can bring. I am not very good with sonnets, but I didn't see and mistakes. This is a great work of art.
Great job
Angie
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thanks HOney for beautiful review. Nathan and I loved your review.
Comment from lappmellott
I think your poem is well written, although I have to admit I was a bit lost here and there. We all certainly have our own personal dreams, many of which never come to pass. Many times, as one grows old, you realize that many of those dreams were never meant to be. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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I think your poem is well written, although I have to admit I was a bit lost here and there. We all certainly have our own personal dreams, many of which never come to pass. Many times, as one grows old, you realize that many of those dreams were never meant to be. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thanks from Nathan and I Lapp. It was a wonderful review.
Comment from nomi338
Awesome! The lines of this work of art soar and crescendo like waves upon the seashore. Your words wash over me like gentle breezes on a warm summer day. This poem is like unto a work of art. I could stand and study it, and as I do so I am sure that I will see many different things. Brilliant work.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Awesome! The lines of this work of art soar and crescendo like waves upon the seashore. Your words wash over me like gentle breezes on a warm summer day. This poem is like unto a work of art. I could stand and study it, and as I do so I am sure that I will see many different things. Brilliant work.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Nathan and I both thank you so much Nomi for an awesome review.
Comment from Cornetist
A marvelous collection of sonnets perfectly (almost) written, perfectly rhymed, perfectly executed. Reading each individual sonnet - with each last line leading us to the next chorus - of this collection is like listening to a beautifully written psalm, one line easing into the next like a smoothly flowing stream.
One small glitch (which I'm sure was not purposeful - the author of this collection is too good a sonneteer) - in sonnet number 3, an iamb seems to have escaped from the first line of the second quatrain:
"some NIGHTS/we REACH/and HOLD/so TIGHT" scans as tetrameter rather than the pentameter you so beautifully use in all the other lines of all the sonnets.
As I said, I'm sure this was not done purposefully but...if it was...could you please explain its use?
'Cause, in my opinion, that one line of tetrameter within all these beautifully written lines of iambic pentameter, stands out like an extremely sore thumb! Put that escaped iamb back in place and this offering becomes absolutely
perfect!
Cornetist
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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A marvelous collection of sonnets perfectly (almost) written, perfectly rhymed, perfectly executed. Reading each individual sonnet - with each last line leading us to the next chorus - of this collection is like listening to a beautifully written psalm, one line easing into the next like a smoothly flowing stream.
One small glitch (which I'm sure was not purposeful - the author of this collection is too good a sonneteer) - in sonnet number 3, an iamb seems to have escaped from the first line of the second quatrain:
"some NIGHTS/we REACH/and HOLD/so TIGHT" scans as tetrameter rather than the pentameter you so beautifully use in all the other lines of all the sonnets.
As I said, I'm sure this was not done purposefully but...if it was...could you please explain its use?
'Cause, in my opinion, that one line of tetrameter within all these beautifully written lines of iambic pentameter, stands out like an extremely sore thumb! Put that escaped iamb back in place and this offering becomes absolutely
perfect!
Cornetist
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Hi!! You were absolutely right and it has been put back in place. Thanks so much from Nathan and I for your gloriously high marks and your correction which helps to make this perfect.
Comment from MelReyn
Great art work, it is perfect for this poem! I love it when the art works so well with the poem.
This was beautiful, "My world is made up of your endless sighs." Wow! I think that this is the way sex should be viewed... not as dirty or wrong, but as a beautiful gift that we give to the one we love. Great work!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Great art work, it is perfect for this poem! I love it when the art works so well with the poem.
This was beautiful, "My world is made up of your endless sighs." Wow! I think that this is the way sex should be viewed... not as dirty or wrong, but as a beautiful gift that we give to the one we love. Great work!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thanks from Nathan and myself for such a beautiful review Mel. We appreciate it so very much.
