Fire Inside
A short poem162 total reviews
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Vincent ...
Under a most appropriate picture at the top, what you have written in these three short lines tells a realistic story providing your readers with vivid imagery.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Vincent ...
Under a most appropriate picture at the top, what you have written in these three short lines tells a realistic story providing your readers with vivid imagery.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Bill Schott
Your five-seven-five manages to send the message that someone has rekindled the furnace for the showing of emotions that will radiate outward. Nice.
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Your five-seven-five manages to send the message that someone has rekindled the furnace for the showing of emotions that will radiate outward. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Taurean Monkey
You can't tell that this wasn't easy to pen, Vincent. It's a fabulous 5-7-5 poem. Great image - not sure whose it is - to accompany your fine write. It burns of passion :-) A pleasure to read, regards, TMonkey
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You can't tell that this wasn't easy to pen, Vincent. It's a fabulous 5-7-5 poem. Great image - not sure whose it is - to accompany your fine write. It burns of passion :-) A pleasure to read, regards, TMonkey
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from fastdigits
the flames of love in seventeen
syllables painting a picture with
words of the intensity of the flame
of desire that is in your heart.
Well done
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the flames of love in seventeen
syllables painting a picture with
words of the intensity of the flame
of desire that is in your heart.
Well done
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem makes good use of every syllable to pay tribute to someone who awakens a fiery passion for life in another.
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Your well-written poem makes good use of every syllable to pay tribute to someone who awakens a fiery passion for life in another.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from cvcopac
5/7/5 alright. It has continuity, comprhension and reads well; has good imagery, is passionate, and is supported by a great picture and colors.
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5/7/5 alright. It has continuity, comprhension and reads well; has good imagery, is passionate, and is supported by a great picture and colors.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your 5-7-5 poem is very good. Syllable count is excellent. Great picture choice with great imagery expressing your feelings. Good luck in the contest.
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Your 5-7-5 poem is very good. Syllable count is excellent. Great picture choice with great imagery expressing your feelings. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Barlock
I liked it. Nicely said.
A very smart use of "you're" to maintain a number of syllables in the third line.
A very appropriate art work.
Good luck with the contest.
Cheers,
JB
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I liked it. Nicely said.
A very smart use of "you're" to maintain a number of syllables in the third line.
A very appropriate art work.
Good luck with the contest.
Cheers,
JB
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Wow, your first one, huh? Great job with this piece as it was very romantic and dreamy. There was good use of imagery as well. Kudos.
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Wow, your first one, huh? Great job with this piece as it was very romantic and dreamy. There was good use of imagery as well. Kudos.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from mauial
I take this poem to mean that someone who had lost hope for love got that spark again from someone's heart that lit up his/ her life again. Nicely done.
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I take this poem to mean that someone who had lost hope for love got that spark again from someone's heart that lit up his/ her life again. Nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
