The devil wins
5/7/5 poem4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet. I gave you your 2 vote.
I love how you worded your poem ...
..made me imagine Satan rubbing his hands with glee in seeing God's children acting worse than animals.
The chaos, violence , destruction fuelled by anger , hatred ...the situation sure escalated quickly ....protesters didn't waste time in going ballistic.
There was even another death that 's getting very little mention though....
.....a-retired policeman who was gunned down while he tired to aid a shop keeper from being robbed by rioters
His life mattered too, right?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
Ciao mystery poet. I gave you your 2 vote.
I love how you worded your poem ...
..made me imagine Satan rubbing his hands with glee in seeing God's children acting worse than animals.
The chaos, violence , destruction fuelled by anger , hatred ...the situation sure escalated quickly ....protesters didn't waste time in going ballistic.
There was even another death that 's getting very little mention though....
.....a-retired policeman who was gunned down while he tired to aid a shop keeper from being robbed by rioters
His life mattered too, right?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Yes my friend, absolutely, every life matters; I thank you for your support and the insights. Please take care.
Comment from Joan E.
What an eye-catching artwork to reinforce your condemnation! Your message is so compelling in so few words, and you even included alliteration to intensify it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
What an eye-catching artwork to reinforce your condemnation! Your message is so compelling in so few words, and you even included alliteration to intensify it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Joan my friend, appreciate the time and thoughtful comments; as always, I thank you kindly.
Comment from LisaMay
Oh yes! Satan will be rubbing his hands with glee at how well we have embraced the dark side of our natures to make mischief in so many ways with evil intentions and actions. Your precise 8 words sums it up well.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
Oh yes! Satan will be rubbing his hands with glee at how well we have embraced the dark side of our natures to make mischief in so many ways with evil intentions and actions. Your precise 8 words sums it up well.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Hello Lisa, I appreciate your time and the insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your few words to allude to the evil running rampant in the word. Oh, yes, I'm sure the Devil is clapping his hands with glee.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
You have made excellent use of your few words to allude to the evil running rampant in the word. Oh, yes, I'm sure the Devil is clapping his hands with glee.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Hello Janice, I thank you for your wonderful insights.