pioneer legacy
a 60 word dash4 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
That would be something to find her grandma's ring after all those years later. What a cherished keepsake that would be! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
That would be something to find her grandma's ring after all those years later. What a cherished keepsake that would be! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Imagine. I had to think for a second if this was even possible. One reviewer wrote that she had heard of something like this actually happening. Cheers.
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I' m ssure it happens but we don't hear about it. But,I doubt that something like this doesn't happen every day. Its sure would be something special!
Patty
Comment from LisaMay
Yours is a nicely told story with a lucky find to bring it full circle. (Personally, I would have preferred Sarah to have flung an apple core rather than a half eaten apple - I hate waste!)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
Yours is a nicely told story with a lucky find to bring it full circle. (Personally, I would have preferred Sarah to have flung an apple core rather than a half eaten apple - I hate waste!)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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haha, I just hate the word core. Thanks for the insightful review. I had to think for a second if this was even possible, cheers.
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I know what you mean - some words can give us the pip.
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haha pip, that might just be another word I won't use. Thanks for your thoughts on this one, cheers.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful flash that spans the generations -- great idea and great implementation! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;) :)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
A wonderful flash that spans the generations -- great idea and great implementation! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;) :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the review. Makes you think for a second if this can actually happen, haha. Cheers.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
I enjoyed your story.
Have actually read of such instances occurring!
Your story has a fine beginning, middle, and ending.
Well-executed!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
Hello Mystery Writer!
I enjoyed your story.
Have actually read of such instances occurring!
Your story has a fine beginning, middle, and ending.
Well-executed!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the encouraging review Diane. It was a fun write, cheers.