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pioneer legacy

a 60 word dash

4 total reviews 
Comment from Patty Palmer
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That would be something to find her grandma's ring after all those years later. What a cherished keepsake that would be! Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    Imagine. I had to think for a second if this was even possible. One reviewer wrote that she had heard of something like this actually happening. Cheers.
reply by Patty Palmer on 12-Feb-2020
    I' m ssure it happens but we don't hear about it. But,I doubt that something like this doesn't happen every day. Its sure would be something special!
    Patty
Comment from LisaMay
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Yours is a nicely told story with a lucky find to bring it full circle. (Personally, I would have preferred Sarah to have flung an apple core rather than a half eaten apple - I hate waste!)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    haha, I just hate the word core. Thanks for the insightful review. I had to think for a second if this was even possible, cheers.
reply by LisaMay on 12-Feb-2020
    I know what you mean - some words can give us the pip.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    haha pip, that might just be another word I won't use. Thanks for your thoughts on this one, cheers.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A wonderful flash that spans the generations -- great idea and great implementation! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;) :)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks for the review. Makes you think for a second if this can actually happen, haha. Cheers.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Mystery Writer!
I enjoyed your story.
Have actually read of such instances occurring!
Your story has a fine beginning, middle, and ending.
Well-executed!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks for the encouraging review Diane. It was a fun write, cheers.