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Spaghetti Push

Still Stubborn

7 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Spaghetti Push, may have a hidden meaning that eludes me. I can only say that the wettest noodles pull me harder than the pushiest pusher can push me.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2019

Comment from Cindy Warren
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I guess it's pretty hard to push a wet noodle. This one made me smile. My computer isn't working properly and I can't see the picture, but I get the impression the pushy pusher might be out of luck this time.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

Comment from Sallyo
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That's about the most implausible insult ever! Noodles at dawn? I don't know the contest, but it gave me a chuckle on a bleak, rainy morning. You, sir are a peculiar poet. I shall return.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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The colors alone and the spacing of your piece is just stunning. The poem itself is rich in imagery and with while using such an economy and divine choice of words.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

Comment from nomi338
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Ooookayyyyy. Please forgive my complete ignorance, but this went completely over my head. I awarded five stars for the simple reason that my view of my own intelligence has just been challenged beyond my ability to comprehend what must be obvious to someone else, and so in an attempt to not seem oblivious, I am going along and pretending that I get it, even though I do not really.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

Comment from Mark D. R.
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Funny verse you composed. I too have used Pamela of FanArt to illustrate my postings.

Do like your centering of text lines. Do consider raising the font size in the FS advanced editor mode. Methinks it makes for a better presentation to FS readers.

Please edit your 'Still stuborn' subtitle; it requires an extra 'b.'

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

Comment from Neonewman
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Lol! This is how you leave it up to your reviewer's imagination my friend.
Where was the noodle pushed, I think through the nose? Great piece, well crafted.
God bless
Steve

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019