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Coffee Lifetime Supply

Caffrey tries to order coffee online.

27 total reviews 
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This sure has a happy ending. I think the main character has a lot of persistence. I am also surprised someone could get a lifetime supply after just a missed order. Surprise endings are fun, though. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


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Comment from Emma 2
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So today I'm giving this post 4 stars. Its interesting and I like it. It was a good story. I can tell that you must love coffee a lot. But don't we all. Anyway, keep up the good work. (Emma

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


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Comment from Sallyo
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This is an interesting way to tell a story, but the tenses slip and slide about and, with no paragraphs, it's a bit difficult to follow. I'm unsure what the clothing shirts had to do with it, other than to prove buying online works sometimes.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019


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Comment from JLR
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Raul, what a fine approach to a short fiction write. We can all imagine the issues with on line orders and the delays and lost purchases, I like that you show corporate beneficence in the end. Fun Read

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019


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Comment from gudbjorg
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Very well written a short story, that has a good flow and quite eye-opening
as this scenario can so easily happen to especially if the company is busy and many tasks to manage. First a trial then a triumph. Free coffee for life. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019


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Comment from Janetsue
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This story shows that persistence pays off, and what a wonderful letter that was announcing the unlimited/lifetime supply of coffee. This is a very interesting story to read. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2019


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    You're very welcome!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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I think all companies who provide lousy service should have to just that. Best wishes in the flash fiction contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2019


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Comment from Randa Dayle
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I am so happy that he got an unlimited supply of coffee, he deserved. funny and witty flash fiction. Good job and continue writing well!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2019


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Comment from Sheridan1
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A nice little story about frustration, determination and fruition.
On-line ordering can be a problem some times. 'Shocked' is a good, strong, word. Keep writing your stories, Raul.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2019


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Comment from JudyE
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An unlimited lifetime supply of coffee? How cool would that be? Sometimes it pays to be determined about what you want and to keep hassling for justice. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019


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