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Let's unite

Where ever you are

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This four-line poem, Let's Unite, sends out the message, to whomever is concerned, that there is no other but he or she.

Note: When used like this in your poem, 'wherever' is together sharing the center E.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


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Comment from Earl Corp
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A short and sweet, succinct poem dedicated to the one you love. If this isn't a contest entry it should be. It makes sense and it invokes emotions within the reader. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


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Comment from Sugarray77
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This is adorable. To me, this is similar to the Roses are red... although your syllable count is different. I enjoyed reading this and think you did a great job crafting this short verse.

All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


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    Thank you