Scattered Seeds
5-7-5 Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I appreciate the subject of your poem and your presentation June is stunning! It is a very good 5-7-5 for the contest. I feel like my brain usually has mostly wind. LOL
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
I appreciate the subject of your poem and your presentation June is stunning! It is a very good 5-7-5 for the contest. I feel like my brain usually has mostly wind. LOL
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from poesyapprentice
Ha! Very clever last line, so unexpected. I think this write is a really good one for a contest entry. It meets the requirement for the prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
Ha! Very clever last line, so unexpected. I think this write is a really good one for a contest entry. It meets the requirement for the prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your contest entry! Your poem reminds me of the parable of the planting of the seeds, some grew, some fell on fallow ground. Yes, liken seeds to words forming a poem. Loved it, XXK.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
Good luck with your contest entry! Your poem reminds me of the parable of the planting of the seeds, some grew, some fell on fallow ground. Yes, liken seeds to words forming a poem. Loved it, XXK.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you for comparing my poem to a Biblical parable! And for the generous rating. A writer?s mind is full of seeds. Some bloom into works of art- some don?t. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi June. I love melyuki. Her photographs are astounding and she dabbles in art as well as she did in this instance. This looks like a good entry for the contest. It is almost like a haiku. That third line is definitely an aha moment. Maybe a Senyru. But definitely a good 5-7-5. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
Hi June. I love melyuki. Her photographs are astounding and she dabbles in art as well as she did in this instance. This looks like a good entry for the contest. It is almost like a haiku. That third line is definitely an aha moment. Maybe a Senyru. But definitely a good 5-7-5. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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I always appreciate your insights. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from melyuki
Thank you for sharing such a thought provoking and insightful verse. Wonderful choice of words to describe the minds ability to search and discover through a myriad of drifting notions ... Finally achieving the chosen goal. Alas ... The forthcoming of this gifted verse. Thank you sincerely for choosing my artwork to accompany such a beautiful outcome of words. Best wishes and happy smiles mel
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
Thank you for sharing such a thought provoking and insightful verse. Wonderful choice of words to describe the minds ability to search and discover through a myriad of drifting notions ... Finally achieving the chosen goal. Alas ... The forthcoming of this gifted verse. Thank you sincerely for choosing my artwork to accompany such a beautiful outcome of words. Best wishes and happy smiles mel
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your lovely artwork. I plan to use another to illustrate a florette poem shortly. Thank you also for your kind review.
Comment from Sugarray77
I like your theme of scattered seeds being blown about and then becoming ideas that germinate into poems. How clever and creative of you to think such a thought. Well done and all the best!! Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
I like your theme of scattered seeds being blown about and then becoming ideas that germinate into poems. How clever and creative of you to think such a thought. Well done and all the best!! Melissa
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from patcelaw
I love this thought provoking 5-7-5 for the contest. I wish the very best in the contest. Keep writing. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
I love this thought provoking 5-7-5 for the contest. I wish the very best in the contest. Keep writing. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the encouraging feedback!
Comment from RodG
A perfect combo of poem and artwork.
I truly like your metaphor describing how poems are birthed. I never thought of the writing process that way. Rod
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
A perfect combo of poem and artwork.
I truly like your metaphor describing how poems are birthed. I never thought of the writing process that way. Rod
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Just let one idea germinate and we?re off! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi June,
A clever 5 7 5 .
The image is delightful and suited perfectly to the words.
The word imagery works well too.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
Hi June,
A clever 5 7 5 .
The image is delightful and suited perfectly to the words.
The word imagery works well too.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your insightful and encouraging comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. For a poet to have seeds blowing in the wind is like ideas flying around in our minds until we find something that inspires enough to start writing a poem.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. For a poet to have seeds blowing in the wind is like ideas flying around in our minds until we find something that inspires enough to start writing a poem.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your insightful comments. Yes, ideas do blow around until one finally takes root in our minds.