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Comment from Xia Thornwood
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Nice spew of words. Very entertaining. Your theme was funny, although hard to find among the big words. This is a fun poem to read, and the fun the author had writing it is well communicated.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
    A disappointing star rating for my effort involved, but thanks. I shall continue to learn and grow.
    Hugs, Trisha
    How could I improve it?
reply by Xia Thornwood on 11-Jul-2018
    There were no technical errors in your poem, and I know that that poem must have taken a ton of effort. Your final product was impressive. It just was confusing. The words were not as well woven in as they could have been. That may have purposeful, given what your poem was about, however. I truly did enjoy it. I've revisited it a couple times, before deciding I should probably review it, since I enjoyed it so much.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
    Now i know, I?ll try harder next time, no hard feelings
Comment from Artasylum
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I think leaving out indecipherable words such as fardel of orgillaceous. My brain exploded. thanks so much for your fun with words. thanks so much yours, dianaxo

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Hi Diana! I?m so glad you enjoyed my free verse. You are welcome, being appreciated for my attempt at the challenge is heartwarming, thanks so much.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-I like your choice of artwork, Trisha.
-You did a good job with the word choices.
-I like how you began this 'vignette' with
the art of poetry, and work origins.
-Good transition with how it was written...
-It was a delightful read.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    What a wonderful review. Thank you so much!.
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Jul-2018
    You are welcome.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Enjoy your weekend, I hope things are going better for you now
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Enjoy your weekend, I hope things are going better for you now
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Enjoy your weekend, I hope things are going better for you now
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Enjoy your weekend, I hope things are going better for you now
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
    Enjoy your weekend, I hope things are going better for you now
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Let the words flow Trisha! Spew your inner thoughts and lets hear you cry and sing, write, write, write, I am listening. You met the challenge here, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Thanks for your supportive, complimentary review., Dolly.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job incorporating those words into your free verse, Bucketlist. I am familiar with the words although I haven't used any of them in my writing. I like how you left a space between each phrase etc. The picture is supportive. Your message comes through well. There are thousands & thousands of words that we [I] will never use because we all get caught up in using many of the same ones over & over & . . . . Jan

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Jan. I appreciate your encouraging review.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Helen,

Thank you for sharing your poem using the assigned words. I know how much you love words, so I'm not surprised you joined this club. Have fun with the challenges,

~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Ethan?s patty. This one took all my FS time this week!!
    hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sugarray77
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Wow, what a challenge and I do believe you couldn't have handled this prompt any better. Clever and cute too. Well done on this and the photograph choice too.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Thanks for your complimentary review. YES, a big challenge, but I need to keep the brain sparkiing LOL
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from rama devi
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Wow! This is witty. What a fun prompt. Wish I had time to play around with it too...you did a fantastic job. I especially enjoyed:

Realised how roots of words arborize
Root origins of words are important for comprehension


One suggestion:

If you wish to get a sarcoid(-)like reaction in readers


I'll have to read the other entries too.

Good luck.

A strong contender, I imagine.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    This is an honor of a great review.Thank you very much.. I know you?re not a sycophant!
    Hugs, Trisha




reply by rama devi on 06-Jul-2018
    Hee hee! :-)) Hugs!
    rd
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    it wouln?t benefit you anyway, because I have no position of authority or any high FS connections. LOL
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    it wouln?t benefit you anyway, because I have no position of authority or any high FS connections. LOL
reply by rama devi on 06-Jul-2018
    What?
Comment from Robbie Yates
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I originally rated this four stars, because just a couple of the words didn't sit right with me... and then I scrolled down and realised you were attempting to use a bunch of multisyllabic, esoteric words, and only a couple had not quite melded into your overall poem. Now I'm sitting here gobsmacked. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Thank you ?gobsmacked? I appreciate your comments about the plethora of unfamilia words. Also, welcome to my poetic ramblings corner and FS.
    Have a great day, Robbie