Smelly Shelly
Life in the mad house6 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the One-Hundred Word Flash Fiction contest. It seems old Smelly was quite mad. Your story was complete and concise.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
Hi there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the One-Hundred Word Flash Fiction contest. It seems old Smelly was quite mad. Your story was complete and concise.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you Patty.
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Thank you Patty.
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
You did a good job with this 100 word story. These aren't easy to pull off but you managed to get a full story in there.
straightjacket is one word.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
hi there,
You did a good job with this 100 word story. These aren't easy to pull off but you managed to get a full story in there.
straightjacket is one word.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thanks. I thought straight jacket was one word but when I checked apparently not.
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OED, Cambridge, Merriam-Webster all have it listed as a single word. more commonly though is the other spelling of straitjacket.
Comment from DR DIP
Are the trials and tribulations of a pyromaniac. or was it just a strange fate of coincidences. nice write Jen Was this her way of dealing with confrontation you think
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
Are the trials and tribulations of a pyromaniac. or was it just a strange fate of coincidences. nice write Jen Was this her way of dealing with confrontation you think
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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I think pyromaniac probably sums it up. Thanks for reading. Jen
Comment from DonandVicki
You made your protagonist out to be an angry old woman and gave her every right to be one. I think the artwork complements your short-short story very well. Don
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
You made your protagonist out to be an angry old woman and gave her every right to be one. I think the artwork complements your short-short story very well. Don
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thanks
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is an interesting and entertaining short story. The language is a bit rough but perfectly suitable for the subject of the story. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
Excellent. This is an interesting and entertaining short story. The language is a bit rough but perfectly suitable for the subject of the story. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
wow what an entry to the contest. You are a few words short of being 100 if it has to be 100 spot on, I think you are five shy.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
wow what an entry to the contest. You are a few words short of being 100 if it has to be 100 spot on, I think you are five shy.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thanks Barb. What would I do without you to check my work, I am so careless. The word count is 98-102 . I had missed some words out but I've corrected it.
So it should be O.K. now.cheers. Jen