Therefore I Am
Inspiration can be found all around us.27 total reviews
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
Exquisite! This measures up by any guage or crierion I know.
Lines that sum up:
"My whisper is the violin caressing my soul.
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...I surrender my soul for this is my moment
I;m alive, therefore I am."
Wow.
Don
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
Exquisite! This measures up by any guage or crierion I know.
Lines that sum up:
"My whisper is the violin caressing my soul.
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...I surrender my soul for this is my moment
I;m alive, therefore I am."
Wow.
Don
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I am ever so humbled. I wrote this while listening to Andrea Bocelli "Melodrama". I am so inspired by his music.
Again, thanks very much. I am encouraged to write more and more because of mentors like you.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Interesting writing with well chosen words that expresses a joy in being inspired from many different sources around us in life. Great job with the variety of images you present in this writing.
Bill
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
Interesting writing with well chosen words that expresses a joy in being inspired from many different sources around us in life. Great job with the variety of images you present in this writing.
Bill
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I wrote this while listening to Andrea Bocelli's "Melodrama". I am so moved by his music and amazing voice.
Kind regards.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
So many great lines in this poem. I especially like, "My whisper is a violin caressing one's soul." I am alive - therefore I am, fulling embracing all that that means.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
So many great lines in this poem. I especially like, "My whisper is a violin caressing one's soul." I am alive - therefore I am, fulling embracing all that that means.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I wrote this while listening to Andrea Bocelli's "Melodrama". His amazing voice along with the music truly inspired me.
Kind regards.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is well written and has good flow. It gives us a picture of nature and the reminds us that God is in everything around him. At the end it seems to say it is about the feelings of one close to death.
Hope it did well in the contest.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
This is well written and has good flow. It gives us a picture of nature and the reminds us that God is in everything around him. At the end it seems to say it is about the feelings of one close to death.
Hope it did well in the contest.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review of my poem. I especially love your last sentence.
Kind regards and have a great week!
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No problem. I am happy you like my take on your poem. Same to you.
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Comment from Ricky1024
this free verse contest poems about almighty God and creator of all it was actually written in seen as well as injector pumps in imagery and object of content it flowed well read well descriptive measures were lined up perfectly good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
this free verse contest poems about almighty God and creator of all it was actually written in seen as well as injector pumps in imagery and object of content it flowed well read well descriptive measures were lined up perfectly good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much Dr Ricky. I am so appreciative of your review.
Kind regards.
Comment from Kathy Allmon
This is beautiful. I love how the artwork just enhances the poem and makes it better. Even though it's free verse it definitely feels like it rhymes and flows throughout. You have a winner. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
This is beautiful. I love how the artwork just enhances the poem and makes it better. Even though it's free verse it definitely feels like it rhymes and flows throughout. You have a winner. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much Kathy for your kind review and encouragement. I am so appreciative.
Have a wonderful week.
Comment from Debbie Pope
My New Year's resolution was to become more spiritual. I need this for my soul because I feel myself becoming hard, intentionally shutting out too many emotions. Thank you for your inspirational poem. Today, I will surrender my soul a little more than usual. Maybe I will feel this warmth and beauty that you so eloquently portray. Thank you.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
My New Year's resolution was to become more spiritual. I need this for my soul because I feel myself becoming hard, intentionally shutting out too many emotions. Thank you for your inspirational poem. Today, I will surrender my soul a little more than usual. Maybe I will feel this warmth and beauty that you so eloquently portray. Thank you.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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What a beautiful review Debbie. It brought me to tears. Yes, I too will heed your advice as well. I am so thankful that you liked my poem.
God bless you and yours always.
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God bless you as well
Comment from Wetbelly01
Sounds pretty impressive to me...
This piece seems to fit right in with the Free Verse stuff...
Didn't come across any 'glitches' along the way...
My compliments!... And Good Luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Sounds pretty impressive to me...
This piece seems to fit right in with the Free Verse stuff...
Didn't come across any 'glitches' along the way...
My compliments!... And Good Luck with the contest!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review.
Kind regards.
Comment from Sherman541
Very inspirational and sentimental with sincerity. Beautiful comparisons of time, elements and other objects of life. Life is precious. Very lovely poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Very inspirational and sentimental with sincerity. Beautiful comparisons of time, elements and other objects of life. Life is precious. Very lovely poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. I am so glad that you enjoyed it.
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You are so welcome :) I did like this poem very much. Again, Good Luck!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful free verse poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from all your great descriptive words! Lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
This is a very beautiful free verse poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from all your great descriptive words! Lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thanks very much for your kind review. I very much appreciate it.