Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Excellent art work
in everyway for these words
What wonders we have in the universe
We wonder why and how such wonders
have happened great writing.

Honey tree
I have no six left

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Thank you so much for your kind review.

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

This looks like something that could have been Beatrix Potter in former times.
It has the charm of youthful innocence. It could go on and on and not be
boring, even mesmerizing.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

The comparison to Bea Potter is beyond compare. I'm so happy you enjoyed this, and thank you for your kind words.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

The vast difference between dream and nightmare is as night and day.
Excellent form and rhyme. Content flows smoothly from one and takes us to the next

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Thank you dear barb! I'm surely happy you enjoyed this.

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

Very nice read which made me shiver. Good rhyme, rhythm and subject, This i the second of yours I have reviewed and find you very compelling. Good job

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Thanks for the very complimentary review. I hope you stop by again ❤️❤️❤️

Comment from Rhonni

Excellent

Very lovely poem...it rhymes and flows nicely and taps the imagination. It puts me straight into a dream state and entrances. I can relate to the dream state that you describe in this piece, thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Rhonni, your review is so gracious. I'm happy that you can relate...

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

In Dreams Is a lovely oral kaleidoscope of the many aspects and experiences of those of us who dream. You have taken us to your oral gallery and painted vivid pictures of both linguistic delight and sadistic terror. Your poem has run the gamut of shared experience. Thanks for sharing in such an Intriguing and appealing way! Happy Thanksgiving! May God bless you!

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Nothing like mixing delight and sadism is my motto.

I love the expression "oral kaleidoscope," and thank you for the rest of your insightful words. Thank you!

reply by Dr. Nad on 27-Nov-2016

You are welcome.
Embrace the love from above.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Luna

= Awesome homage to your son.
= The artwork further emphasizes you written word.
= I especially enjoyed the repetitive last line of each stanza. Nice touch.

= Happy Thanksgiving to all who celebrate!
= Those who don't, I bid you a great day/evening. (*<*)

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Thanks for the kind review, Jax. Happy Thanksgiving to i you as well!

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this reads very well and is a beautiful poem I have never come across this form but must say you make it look so easy to accomplish I know it inst well done I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Thank you, Jill,

Your most gracious words of review touched my heart. Hope you know how much I appreciate it.

luna

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

This one I like best out of your three just read.
Good rolling rhythm with the repeats not affecting the narrative, Good flow.
Well thought through.
Bravo.
Have a great day.
My best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Thanks so much for letting me know this was your favorite of the three! I'm happy that you didn't think the repeats affected the narrative.

I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!

luna

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent melding of form and topic
The dreams, galaxies, and fantasy
come to life with the mono-rhyme scheme
and the tetrameter with the repeat in line four
A wonderful "nocturnal sleigh" ride
accompanied by marvelous art work
Very well done

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Dear rspoet,

Your review was lovely. I'm going to have to fan you so that I, too, can be notified when you post new writing.

I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!

luna