Hello Yellow
An alphabet story10 total reviews
Comment from Heidi M
Wow, this took some creative thinking to come up with. You complied with the directions for the contest and even found a picture to match! Very clever.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
Wow, this took some creative thinking to come up with. You complied with the directions for the contest and even found a picture to match! Very clever.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Hi Heidi, Yes it was challenging but fun to try and compose a story with these requirements and this is my attempt and I am pleasec you stopped by to have a read and appreciate your lovely review Cheers
Comment from DonandVicki
I would have to say that this is one of the most memorable and imaginative poetic verse that I have reviewed in quite some time. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
I would have to say that this is one of the most memorable and imaginative poetic verse that I have reviewed in quite some time. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Hi Don andVicki Thank
you so much for your encouraging words for my alphabet entry It was fun thinking up something that made some sort of sense even if it is a bit outrageous You comments are much appreciated Cheers for your review and time
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
very well done with this creative piece of writing. These don't really lend themselves to great stories but this is good and fun.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
Hi there,
very well done with this creative piece of writing. These don't really lend themselves to great stories but this is good and fun.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 27-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Hi GMG Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my alphabet entry It was a fun challenge and I hope this makes the grade . Yes it is quite difficult Cheers for your time and review.
Comment from oliver818
Nice story, this is a difficult task and I liked your happy zebra tale. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
Nice story, this is a difficult task and I liked your happy zebra tale. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Hi oliver818, Thank you for reading my story and for your feedback much appre4ciated as is your good luck message. you too have a great day Cheers
Comment from crybry67
Great little story, I imagine it to be a difficult task, but it is one you did well. You chose a nice piece of art work to complement, best of luck...
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
Great little story, I imagine it to be a difficult task, but it is one you did well. You chose a nice piece of art work to complement, best of luck...
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Hi crybry67. Many thanks for stoppong by to read my little story it was quite difficult bit I enjoyed the challenge and appreciate your feedback and best of luck wishes Cheers
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Great use of this difficult style. My poetry always winds up sounding like limericks. "There once was a girl from Nantucket." You know the rest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
Great use of this difficult style. My poetry always winds up sounding like limericks. "There once was a girl from Nantucket." You know the rest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Hi Thomas, Thanks for reading and reviewing my work for this contest I write more poetry but enjoy the occasional short story challenge so I am pleased for your comments Cheers
Comment from mvbrooks
Very creative use of the full alphabet and highlighting the first letter made it easier for the reader to see the full alphabet. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
Very creative use of the full alphabet and highlighting the first letter made it easier for the reader to see the full alphabet. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Hi mybrooks. I am glad you had a read of my story for this contest it was fun to get something that sounded reasonable although a bit left field LOL So many Thanks for your review and good luck message Cheers
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Zebras are such unique animals.
However, yellow-striped?
Would that not indicate them being cowards?
Should be an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
Zebras are such unique animals.
However, yellow-striped?
Would that not indicate them being cowards?
Should be an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Hi Brett, No a yellow Zebra would be quite unique instead, LOL Thanks for your review and great rating for my story Cheers
Comment from June Sargent
Really enjoyed the story - actually made sense while painting an amusing picture. Wasn't just a mish mash of words thrown together. Enjoyed the read. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
Really enjoyed the story - actually made sense while painting an amusing picture. Wasn't just a mish mash of words thrown together. Enjoyed the read. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Hi June, I am so pleased you thouht the story worked it was indeed a challenge but I had fun and wanted it to make sense. Thanks for your review Cheers
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done. Exactly 26 words.The story line is consistant and easy to understand. It is well presented too. Good job in this difficult contest
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
This is well done. Exactly 26 words.The story line is consistant and easy to understand. It is well presented too. Good job in this difficult contest
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Hi RYME4U. Thank you very much for reading my entry for this rather challenging contest. I thought this may work so I appreciate your comments Cheers