Refusing to Reason
a cinquain4 total reviews
Comment from ellie6
A nice example of a cinquain. It highlights a universal truth, that man is his own worst enemy. The beginning and end fit the theme admirably.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
A nice example of a cinquain. It highlights a universal truth, that man is his own worst enemy. The beginning and end fit the theme admirably.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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hello ellie, appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from TPAC
Sad to me in its truth content, I agreed with this write latter statements, although I find reasoning in the other creatures of our world, like a crow taking dirty bread and cleaning it in water
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
Sad to me in its truth content, I agreed with this write latter statements, although I find reasoning in the other creatures of our world, like a crow taking dirty bread and cleaning it in water
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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I hear you my friend, in terms of logic, mankind's the only creature capable; appreciate your time and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nicely done! I like how you started and ended the poem with the same word. You accomplished a lot in a few lines. Good job!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
Nicely done! I like how you started and ended the poem with the same word. You accomplished a lot in a few lines. Good job!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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I am pleased to read your wonderful review and am glad that you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from VMac
Great poem and great choice of form. I like the use of your alliteration with the line 'God given gift' and also 'man mains man'. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Good luck in the competition. Write on!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
Great poem and great choice of form. I like the use of your alliteration with the line 'God given gift' and also 'man mains man'. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Good luck in the competition. Write on!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
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Hello VMaz, I am pleased to read your encouraging review, appreciate your time and thank you very much.