Dark Eyes Watch
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Comment from Treischel
You gave me goose bumps with this dark brooding free verse poem that carries malicious intent through those eyes. You painted the mood through the picture to the verse exquisitely, then took it to the next level.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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You gave me goose bumps with this dark brooding free verse poem that carries malicious intent through those eyes. You painted the mood through the picture to the verse exquisitely, then took it to the next level.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Tom for a great review. Little different.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a very dark poem. I like your use of rhyme in this free verse which is very well written but oh, so sad. I know, I write a lot of dark poems, especially lately it seems~Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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This is a very dark poem. I like your use of rhyme in this free verse which is very well written but oh, so sad. I know, I write a lot of dark poems, especially lately it seems~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Debbie for a wonderful review.
Comment from Jackarrie
A dark poem, those dark eyes watching and waiting for the proverbial moment for them to strike. An enjoyable read.
Well done.
Meanwhile,
those dark eyes watch,
from beneath the black.
No tears they show,
they just wait.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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A dark poem, those dark eyes watching and waiting for the proverbial moment for them to strike. An enjoyable read.
Well done.
Meanwhile,
those dark eyes watch,
from beneath the black.
No tears they show,
they just wait.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thanks Mary for an awesome review.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Whey, the eyes of the waaiter, wathcer...and the river Styx...death just holding still, like a moment held in statis...
good poem, love the images...but, I like the dark ones...makes me appreciate the living time.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Hi. Whey, the eyes of the waaiter, wathcer...and the river Styx...death just holding still, like a moment held in statis...
good poem, love the images...but, I like the dark ones...makes me appreciate the living time.
padumachitta
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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LOL than Padu for a wonderful review of this one.
Comment from l.raven
HI Blue, there are days I would jump right in that river...I do have my moments but still try to keep in faith...so how was your day ???? I had a lot I had to get done...I hate days when I run out of time and still so much to do....Love your poem you...very well written Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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HI Blue, there are days I would jump right in that river...I do have my moments but still try to keep in faith...so how was your day ???? I had a lot I had to get done...I hate days when I run out of time and still so much to do....Love your poem you...very well written Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Linda. It was sort of laid back but I did a lot.
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so did I...had soooooo much to do...I like staying busy...but sometimes...I need to stop...glad you had an easy day...xxoo your sooooooooo welcome...xxoo
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Smile girlie.
Comment from Dutchie
I love this dark poem. Sounds somewhat sinister.
So well written, this one. If I'm right the river Styx was one of the rivers in the Greek mythology that separated the upper world from the underworld. A pleasure to read and well expressed. Great one!! Fia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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I love this dark poem. Sounds somewhat sinister.
So well written, this one. If I'm right the river Styx was one of the rivers in the Greek mythology that separated the upper world from the underworld. A pleasure to read and well expressed. Great one!! Fia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Perfect Fia and a wonderful review. Thank you so mucn.
Comment from comanalbert
You described very deeply those eyes waiting and waiting, a tragedy to happen, a soul that accompany them. I can feel them watching me from somewhere and gives me chills. I love your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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You described very deeply those eyes waiting and waiting, a tragedy to happen, a soul that accompany them. I can feel them watching me from somewhere and gives me chills. I love your poem.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Al for a wonderful review of this one.
Comment from Bina1
Yikes, a scarey group to greet the day! Sounds so sinister! A very haunting feel with an eerie art selection as well. You do it all so well............
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Yikes, a scarey group to greet the day! Sounds so sinister! A very haunting feel with an eerie art selection as well. You do it all so well............
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Bina for a wonderful review. How are you girl?
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someday it seems overwhelming, then I slap myself and say grow up!
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Sigh Bina. How old are you now?
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67
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Wonderful girl.
Comment from NicciFaye
I thought this was an excellent poem and a great write. Different and diverse than your usually poems. Stretching and expaning those beautiful thoughts of yours. Well written and def enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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I thought this was an excellent poem and a great write. Different and diverse than your usually poems. Stretching and expaning those beautiful thoughts of yours. Well written and def enjoyed this!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Nicci for a beautiful review.
Comment from Bayberry
In addition to your excellent poetry, I also look forward to finding out what picture you choose to complement them. As usual, this is a striking package. Very mysterious and memorable.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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In addition to your excellent poetry, I also look forward to finding out what picture you choose to complement them. As usual, this is a striking package. Very mysterious and memorable.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you ever so much Janet and I am glad you like the pic.