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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from Sararb
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I like the format and the style of poetry. You did a very good job with this one. I can almost smell the aroma coming from that grill. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    Thank you Sara. The only thing better is a campfire.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
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Cute message that continues with the break in your weather.
So glad for you. Are they sweet Italian? Enjoyable read.
Sun and fun. Robin :)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
    Thanks Robin. Definitely Italian Brats.
Comment from Indie Skreet
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a tasty little 5-7-5 here but the photo should have been 5 sausages, 7 burgers and 5 more sausages perhaps, in a row :). Summer looks like it has come for you Tom, best Indie

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
    Thanks Indie. That would have made one full grille. Finally! It got up to 80 degrees yesterday.
Comment from twinklepoems
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Funny! This is in good 5-7-5 form. Finally warm enough for BBQ! It looks good. This seems like the perfect short form to talk about doing some grilling. I always love when the reviews are longer than the poem! Lol.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
    Thanks twinklepoems. Get used to it. That frequently is the case.
Comment from tedanytime
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Glad your grill is smoking. Hope the meat and veggies don't burn. I t is always a great day when we can uncover the grill and anticipate the taste of a freshly grilled meal.

Your verse is a nice 5-7-5. Your notes indicate a whitney.
Maybe the "smoke gets in your eyes."

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
    Oops! Just wrote a Whitney too. I fix that.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
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Ahh Nothing better than the smell of a barbeque. :D

A very nicely done 5-7-5 poem. :D


The photo makes me hungry. :D

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
    Thanks Sam. Me too!
Comment from ededdas
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I think the picture over exaggerates the poem. The piece itself is excellent. I can smell the BBQ. Good job on the imagery. I feel like I'm there and feeling the heat from the sun and grill.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
    Thanks ededdas. Glad you captured the mood.