A tune frae down under.
Rudie bits so be warned. Bathroom humour?18 total reviews
Comment from EMB
Forget about the poem, I thoroughly enjoyed your reading. Actually, I enjoyed how much you seemed to enjoy your reading. It brought a smile on my face that never left. This was great, my friend. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Forget about the poem, I thoroughly enjoyed your reading. Actually, I enjoyed how much you seemed to enjoy your reading. It brought a smile on my face that never left. This was great, my friend. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Thank you.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from Jaq Cee
LOL. I'm from Dundee and this was the funniest thing I've read in a while on here. Brilliant.
Great rhyming and flow, love the vernacular too. :) Jaq x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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LOL. I'm from Dundee and this was the funniest thing I've read in a while on here. Brilliant.
Great rhyming and flow, love the vernacular too. :) Jaq x
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Thank you.Glad I have tickled your fancy:)
The Auld Yin.
Comment from mystery poet
Ay jist luv this blidy thing! He wae gude at
makin music with his bum, He whistle's 'Annie get yer
Gun'. 'Per wee soul is noo sae cautious whin he farts
he makes sure he's near a toot sae he kin dart'.
Wish I could write like this...Nice piece here...
Thanks!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Ay jist luv this blidy thing! He wae gude at
makin music with his bum, He whistle's 'Annie get yer
Gun'. 'Per wee soul is noo sae cautious whin he farts
he makes sure he's near a toot sae he kin dart'.
Wish I could write like this...Nice piece here...
Thanks!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Thank you.
The Auld Yin.
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My pleasure!
Comment from Bill Schott
Wow! This was fun to follow through. I had to read it out loud to my wife to get the brogue down. She thought it a bit vulgar, so I read it louder. Fun, fun read.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Wow! This was fun to follow through. I had to read it out loud to my wife to get the brogue down. She thought it a bit vulgar, so I read it louder. Fun, fun read.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Thank you.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from God's Writer
Tis another wonderful poem. I love the way your words work to bring out the spice of life in these grand stories in the form of poems. The place feelings and emotion on pedestals that are in full view of the reader. They paint such beautiful full of life scenes that are full of laughter and gaiety. Grand Job!!!!!!!
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Tis another wonderful poem. I love the way your words work to bring out the spice of life in these grand stories in the form of poems. The place feelings and emotion on pedestals that are in full view of the reader. They paint such beautiful full of life scenes that are full of laughter and gaiety. Grand Job!!!!!!!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2011
Comment from Van
Too funny...for his next encore he may want to spice things up with a bit of fire-works. LOL or maybe he could do the tune under water for that gargled special effect.
Hilarious.
Great piece.
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Too funny...for his next encore he may want to spice things up with a bit of fire-works. LOL or maybe he could do the tune under water for that gargled special effect.
Hilarious.
Great piece.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
Comment from TammyGail
Always love your poems
They have a special feel to them
I enjoyed this poem
It was very well written
Thanks for the reading and index as well
Thanks for sharing
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Always love your poems
They have a special feel to them
I enjoyed this poem
It was very well written
Thanks for the reading and index as well
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
Comment from chrissy8
Gosh, this is so funny you have me wheezing with tears in my eyes. I don't how or where you come up with this, but please keep it coming. I love reading your bathroom humor! You are one of the few authors who actually do what you want and stay original even though some people may not like it. And by the way, I have scottish ancestors....you think that's why I have gas so bad I can also play on cue?? Too much information?? Sorry. Thanks for a laugh!
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Gosh, this is so funny you have me wheezing with tears in my eyes. I don't how or where you come up with this, but please keep it coming. I love reading your bathroom humor! You are one of the few authors who actually do what you want and stay original even though some people may not like it. And by the way, I have scottish ancestors....you think that's why I have gas so bad I can also play on cue?? Too much information?? Sorry. Thanks for a laugh!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
Comment from purrfect tale
Well I understand why he gave it up and am glad I wasn't a guest at that particular party. As always, your humor has me rolling on the floor with tears in my eyes. And to top it off you even made it rhyme.
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Well I understand why he gave it up and am glad I wasn't a guest at that particular party. As always, your humor has me rolling on the floor with tears in my eyes. And to top it off you even made it rhyme.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You certainly do
meet them, Alex..
a great story in
a poem.
Tell him to take
charcoal, which is
good for the wind...
Margaret
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You certainly do
meet them, Alex..
a great story in
a poem.
Tell him to take
charcoal, which is
good for the wind...
Margaret
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011