The Baby Rash Cure
jingle contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from jaynugget24
I loved your commercial it is so cute, it is catchy and appropriate for tv and radio. Also your background is on target.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
I loved your commercial it is so cute, it is catchy and appropriate for tv and radio. Also your background is on target.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Fayesh,
Enjoyed your jaunty jingle jangle. That 4th line is so clever! If this was for a real Doctor Smoothie's contest, they just might pick yours because it is short, sweet, clear and catchy. Well done.
Cheers,
Whizpurr ^-^
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
Hi Fayesh,
Enjoyed your jaunty jingle jangle. That 4th line is so clever! If this was for a real Doctor Smoothie's contest, they just might pick yours because it is short, sweet, clear and catchy. Well done.
Cheers,
Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 30-May-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from kowen714
I like this. It;s short, sweet and to the point. I follows all the guidlines and is descriptive the way a jingle should be. Great job! good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
I like this. It;s short, sweet and to the point. I follows all the guidlines and is descriptive the way a jingle should be. Great job! good luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-May-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from becky7777
very very catchy it would work great as a jingle. as I have been reading these entries there has been some long ones that wont work for a tv or radio time limit. you have it right. good luck in the contest.
Becky
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
very very catchy it would work great as a jingle. as I have been reading these entries there has been some long ones that wont work for a tv or radio time limit. you have it right. good luck in the contest.
Becky
Comment Written 30-May-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from pilarblue
Ahhh, this is very cute!! You did an excellent job and I could definitely hear the Itsy Bitsy Spider tune in it. Great job. :D -Pilar
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
Ahhh, this is very cute!! You did an excellent job and I could definitely hear the Itsy Bitsy Spider tune in it. Great job. :D -Pilar
Comment Written 30-May-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from mmichelle97219
It is so cute and it adheres to all the contest rules well. I liked it much, and wish you the best of luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
It is so cute and it adheres to all the contest rules well. I liked it much, and wish you the best of luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
Comment Written 30-May-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review and this fun contest.
Comment from skye
Now I am sold on this product, because the ad is so cute.
The pictures are also cute,which helps sell the item.
Your jingle coaxes the new mother to buy the best for her infant.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
Now I am sold on this product, because the ad is so cute.
The pictures are also cute,which helps sell the item.
Your jingle coaxes the new mother to buy the best for her infant.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from anabelle
Very funny, and quite catchy jingle. You're very creative and I especially liked the 'wipe the burning out'.
Well done, and good luck.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
Very funny, and quite catchy jingle. You're very creative and I especially liked the 'wipe the burning out'.
Well done, and good luck.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 29-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great job with the jingle. Great job with everything. I think they actually do have a Boudreaux's butt paste I don't think that's for baby's though. Great idea especially is your baby has a rash. Excellent job with everything.
reply by the author on 27-May-2009
Great job with the jingle. Great job with everything. I think they actually do have a Boudreaux's butt paste I don't think that's for baby's though. Great idea especially is your baby has a rash. Excellent job with everything.
Comment Written 27-May-2009
reply by the author on 27-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from stormwolf2
Cute and funny, I was singling it out loud and got a strange look from my pooch!
I thought this was great fun! It just flows off the tongue.
Good luck and best wishes,
Malcolm
reply by the author on 27-May-2009
Cute and funny, I was singling it out loud and got a strange look from my pooch!
I thought this was great fun! It just flows off the tongue.
Good luck and best wishes,
Malcolm
Comment Written 27-May-2009
reply by the author on 27-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.