The Walkers
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Comment from BethShelby
This is a good chapter in you story. The walkers are able to outsmart the dealers in slave trade and get the girl. Im enjoying reading this story. I'm glad they were able to recue Prisha.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
This is a good chapter in you story. The walkers are able to outsmart the dealers in slave trade and get the girl. Im enjoying reading this story. I'm glad they were able to recue Prisha.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words! We're about to the end.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
You've created a story of good and evil in the spiritual world that is told very much in human terms. There's an action and adventure air about this; but I'm not sure if you really fit into a particular genre. It's too adult for teens, with all those references to sexual abuse and slavery, but too much like a comic book for adults. I think you have to decide which genre you want to be in. This sounds like a great story for teens, but if you want it to be that, then you have to cut some of these provocative scenes. estory
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
You've created a story of good and evil in the spiritual world that is told very much in human terms. There's an action and adventure air about this; but I'm not sure if you really fit into a particular genre. It's too adult for teens, with all those references to sexual abuse and slavery, but too much like a comic book for adults. I think you have to decide which genre you want to be in. This sounds like a great story for teens, but if you want it to be that, then you have to cut some of these provocative scenes. estory
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thanks again!
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've not been around for a while, I was afraid I wouldn't know what to expect. But thankfully, I must have joined in at just the right moment when they save Prisha. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
I've not been around for a while, I was afraid I wouldn't know what to expect. But thankfully, I must have joined in at just the right moment when they save Prisha. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thanks again!
Comment from royowen
Thank you for this post Mike. You are a good guy, I like the way Cak is described, I remember when 185,000 soldiers were disposed by one single Angel when Hezekiah was on the throne in Judah, it should be easy with these guys, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : (Miicheal) smiles. Michael? 2: (Glady)? my friend.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
Thank you for this post Mike. You are a good guy, I like the way Cak is described, I remember when 185,000 soldiers were disposed by one single Angel when Hezekiah was on the throne in Judah, it should be easy with these guys, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : (Miicheal) smiles. Michael? 2: (Glady)? my friend.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thanks again! I'll get that fixed.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sally Law
I have been crafting a story much like this with demons and angels as main characters. I have read everything written by Frank Peretti and love The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis. I see you like this kind of writing too. The spiritual realm, both good and evil spirits, are always vying for the souls of mankind. Delightful read for my day. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
I have been crafting a story much like this with demons and angels as main characters. I have read everything written by Frank Peretti and love The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis. I see you like this kind of writing too. The spiritual realm, both good and evil spirits, are always vying for the souls of mankind. Delightful read for my day. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Hi, Sally. I read one of your chapters, and it was terrific. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ricky1024
"Prisha's Freedom"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
"Prisha's Freedom"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thanks again!