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One of my pet peeves - stay in your lane, go the right way,
2 total reviews
Comment from
Ricky1024
This is a Write a Rant Contest Entry Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The problem is most states have different rules to driving on the roads.
I live in New Jersey and when visiting Florida, noticed the difference traffic patterns especially for changing and exiting lanes.
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Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from
nor84
There's a weird AC in there twice, and one case of 'their' for 'there.' I think you need to take another run through it. Good luck in the contest. I don't know what you were trying to say with AC, but I'm sure you got a foreign language somehow.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
Stinking gremlins - lol. I will definitely make another run through on it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
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