The Park Bench
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Comment from Boogienights
I like this very much, I agree with what you say about love. You are right in saying that love cures, even in the hardest of times. Thank you for sharing your well written poem. :)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
I like this very much, I agree with what you say about love. You are right in saying that love cures, even in the hardest of times. Thank you for sharing your well written poem. :)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the nice review and high rating, Sharon.
Joan
Comment from poetwatch
Young love was a time long ago when life was simple, single, and sweet, Dragonpoet. :) Then life sets in and the kids start to cry. We work all day and the bills pile high. Not so simple anymore now there are two or three at the door. All are single and the kids... well they are sweet. :) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
Young love was a time long ago when life was simple, single, and sweet, Dragonpoet. :) Then life sets in and the kids start to cry. We work all day and the bills pile high. Not so simple anymore now there are two or three at the door. All are single and the kids... well they are sweet. :) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the review and all the stars.
Joan
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for the club entry it's so nice to see different interpretations of the same photo. It's amazing. Your poem has a great flow and rhyme. Really nice interpretation of the given artwork.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
This is a beautifully written poem for the club entry it's so nice to see different interpretations of the same photo. It's amazing. Your poem has a great flow and rhyme. Really nice interpretation of the given artwork.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem, Joanne. I appreciate both.
Joan
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Your welcome
Comment from Janet Foor
I love this painting. It says volumes and your sweet poem definitely has a powerful message as well.
I too believe that love always cures.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
I love this painting. It says volumes and your sweet poem definitely has a powerful message as well.
I too believe that love always cures.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your kind comments and generous rating, Janet.
Joan
Comment from Liz Westfall
This is an adorable poem. I enjoy your rhyming here. Young love is such a precious happening. Whether it lasts or fades, it's pure and complete. Young love is special.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
This is an adorable poem. I enjoy your rhyming here. Young love is such a precious happening. Whether it lasts or fades, it's pure and complete. Young love is special.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the nice review, Liz. Joan.
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely interpretation of this artwork! It's nostalgic and hopeful. If it's true love, the bond will only grow stronger over time. From small beginnings, the seed of love grows when it is nourished by light and warmth from conjoined hearts.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
What a lovely interpretation of this artwork! It's nostalgic and hopeful. If it's true love, the bond will only grow stronger over time. From small beginnings, the seed of love grows when it is nourished by light and warmth from conjoined hearts.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks, June. I appreciate your positive comments.
Joan
Comment from Wendy G
That's just beautiful, and all so true. You've written a fine and thoughtful poem, and it flows well and rhymes well. It's the perfect accompaniment for the image prompt.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
That's just beautiful, and all so true. You've written a fine and thoughtful poem, and it flows well and rhymes well. It's the perfect accompaniment for the image prompt.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for the nice review, Wendy.
Joan
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very heartwarming and delightful poem of young love. I particularly like hobbies and pets put in the background. Once love is discovered all other things are put aside.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
A very heartwarming and delightful poem of young love. I particularly like hobbies and pets put in the background. Once love is discovered all other things are put aside.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Mary, for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Joan
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I'm not here to counterpunch the thought and I wish that it was true but with half of marriages ending in divorce, if a cure was used, only half the time it endures.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
I'm not here to counterpunch the thought and I wish that it was true but with half of marriages ending in divorce, if a cure was used, only half the time it endures.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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You are right about the sad statistics of divorce. I think some divorce would be countered if marriage isn't forced on a girl and boy who create a baby. But this was only to tell what you feel at the beginning of love. You always feel it will last forever.
Thanks, Tom.
Joan
Comment from dellsworthpoet
The poem flows well. The presentation is warm and fuzzy. The images are clear. The narrative stays on point. The simple language fits the theme.
Thanks for sharing a good read.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
The poem flows well. The presentation is warm and fuzzy. The images are clear. The narrative stays on point. The simple language fits the theme.
Thanks for sharing a good read.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the short, yet thorough review.
Joan
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You are welcome.