The Scotsman's Freezing-point
He should've put on his woollen undies. (A limerick)6 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was cute and amusing! I like limericks, and you've done a good job with them. Good luck in the two-stanza poem competition. I am sure you will do well.
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This was cute and amusing! I like limericks, and you've done a good job with them. Good luck in the two-stanza poem competition. I am sure you will do well.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is hysterical! The photo is a great choice along with your comical words made me laugh. I wish you much success in the contest. You will have my vote when it comes around.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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This is hysterical! The photo is a great choice along with your comical words made me laugh. I wish you much success in the contest. You will have my vote when it comes around.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this touch of silliness. Thanks for your support.
Comment from kahpot
What a great (not for Don) image your words give the reader, even front on nothing to show but a bum, an excellent read, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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What a great (not for Don) image your words give the reader, even front on nothing to show but a bum, an excellent read, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this touch of silliness. Thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi MA. This made me smile a couple of good limericks
Only one line faulted on limerick rhythm for me
Now he's got nothing at all to show
I suggest changing the word now to
He's got nothing at all 'now' to show
Good luck well done
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Hi MA. This made me smile a couple of good limericks
Only one line faulted on limerick rhythm for me
Now he's got nothing at all to show
I suggest changing the word now to
He's got nothing at all 'now' to show
Good luck well done
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the nudge regarding faulty metre - I have adopted your suggestion.
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Great good luck it?s a winner
Comment from Tom Horonzy
If there were any newspaper left in print with a comic section, this my wee Laddie would make someone's day. ................................................................................................................
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If there were any newspaper left in print with a comic section, this my wee Laddie would make someone's day. ................................................................................................................
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from tfawcus
This double limerick makes an entertaining response to the challenge. Let's hope it tickles the judges' fancy!
No doubt, when the lasses tickle Hamish's fancy, they'll exclaim, "Och! It's gruesome!"
To which he will no doubt reply, "Tickle again, and you'll find it's grew some more."
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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This double limerick makes an entertaining response to the challenge. Let's hope it tickles the judges' fancy!
No doubt, when the lasses tickle Hamish's fancy, they'll exclaim, "Och! It's gruesome!"
To which he will no doubt reply, "Tickle again, and you'll find it's grew some more."
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Haha... thanks for the morning's chuckle.