To Fill the Void
100 words2 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Spot on at 100 words--compelling and provacative story--stunning ending--fine work in a flash.
Sugg: [omit: always] had countless lovers=>she'd had countless lovers
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
Spot on at 100 words--compelling and provacative story--stunning ending--fine work in a flash.
Sugg: [omit: always] had countless lovers=>she'd had countless lovers
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your complementary and encouraging review and comments. Thank you for the suggestion. I'll see if I can work that in to keep that word count at 100. UGGs.
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Thank you for your complementary and encouraging review and comments. Thank you for the suggestion. I'll see if I can work that in to keep that word count at 100. UGGs.
Comment from lancellot
A very interesting story and take on drug addiction. Yes, I suppose it can happen this way. There are many paths a person can take that lead to self-destruction. The lack of personal achievement and failure can cause damage to a life.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
A very interesting story and take on drug addiction. Yes, I suppose it can happen this way. There are many paths a person can take that lead to self-destruction. The lack of personal achievement and failure can cause damage to a life.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your kind comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.