Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Exceptional

Endurance
by June Sargent

Hello, June,

Yay! I am so happy you added a chapter and just in time. The chapters were getting too political.... you brought the book back to nature... good job! I love the message of natures' endurance.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

So glad you liked it! Thought it was time to get back to the beauty of nature and of us growing old gracefully- lol

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 24-Jan-2021

Yes, it was time. Thank you :)

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

June,

Nice response to this Renga collaboration. I have been to see El Capitan. You do justice to its majesty. The movie about climbing the same, Free Solo, is an extraordinary feat. Recently a woman climbed the same.

Do like your author's note; it goes nicely with aged ... grace.

Mark

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you! Glad you could relate to this one. It's wonderful that you were able to view this natural wonder yourself.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem, June, is in great form. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. You are right about how majestic the mountain is and will be so for generations to enjoy. Thank you for the informative notes,
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this short one. Always happy to get your feedback.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

This is a nice couplet to add to the Renga. El Capitan has aged with grace. It's majesty and endurance are undeniable. Your two lines should provide a strong lead in for subsequent verses.
Well done, June.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this short one. Always happy to get your feedback.