General Fiction posted October 1, 2020


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80 word flash fiction

Looking back

by trimple














Emma Stowe sat at the laminated dining table in the care home, gazing at her very first lunch and a glass of water.

'You and me both,' she said quietly; a tear rolling over her cheek.

'Is everything okay, Grandma?' Jessy enquired as she reached out to the old woman's frail shoulder.

Emma looked up with a half-hearted smile, then back down again towards a plate of  halibut and golden samphire...

'We wish we were swimming in the sea'...



80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry

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Golden Samphire= Young leaves may be eaten raw or cooked as a leaf vegetable which is often served with fish.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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