General Fiction posted September 17, 2020


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Must be careful when drinking Coke at a game.

Unexpected Pain

by HarryT


Relaxing at my son’s Pony League game, I watch a yellow jacket circling near my sweaty Coke can.  My attention is drawn as my son comes to bat. He takes a strike, then lines the next pitch into center field. I tip my cap and give him a well-done wave. I take a long swig of my soft drink, slush it about but when I was about to swallow, I feel something moving, then a piercing sting to my cheek.  I spit out the Coke and look down; clinging to blade of grass is a smiling, Coke-soaked, yellow jacket wasp.
 



100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution.
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