Spiritual Poetry posted April 15, 2006 Chapters:  ...7 8 -9- 10... 


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15 word poem; All are men but all are not humans

A chapter in the book O My God and Mother Nature!

O Hills!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


Hills are metaphoric. Lord feels unhappy with man's state and status; man is falling from human values and humanity; all men are not humans; man who works to the cause of human race is human.


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This Book of Poetry -- Nature and God's Infinite Creations in Appreciation contains poems in different structures and styles. It discovers, opens and expresses the infinite diversities of Nature, God


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This Book of Poetry O My God has poems on and about Nature and Infinite Creations of God and Gifts of God











Hills ask God, "What's man?"

Lord says, "His humane role's farce."

Most men, few humans!














 



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Poetic licence used in art and style of expression


This is an independent chapter 9 of the book


man includes woman


This is a free verse poem, and it's not a contest entry, in 15 words, in my own styles, three phases of thoughts implied in 3 lines:
Action,
Activation, and
Fruition


Mostly, man's role is now farce, as Lord is unhappy with the destined state-stand-status of man; to Lord, man who practices humanity per God will achieve the state and status of Human, as it is assumed, human is man but he is more than man, to say otherwise, all are men, but all men are not humans, all humans are men but all men are not humans, man who works selflessly to the cause of humanity and mankind or human race is human, to say briefly


Hills are asking God about man's roles, stand, state and status on this planet earth


Enjoy extreme metaphoric use in the work


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This Book of Poetry O My God has poems on and about Nature and Infinite Creations of God and Gifts of God



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