Fantasy Poetry posted August 4, 2020 | Chapters: | ...23 24 -25- 26... |
The birth of sensuality at the shore
A chapter in the book Carolina Pastorals
Outer Banks pt.2: Venus
by estory
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How many times have we seen that beautiful woman coming out of the water at the beach and fallen in love? But what exactly is in that moment of seduction? What came first, the dream of the hand, or the figure filling it? What is it that we are falling in love with? There is so much going on in that moment, underneath the surface. But I wanted to capture the mysteriousness of it all, the undercurrent of forces that are beyond us, moving us in the life we are living. The form is roughly hewn quatrains in a subtle off rhyme, with subtle echoing effects. estory
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