Satire Fiction posted July 26, 2020


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She loves you by the Beatles &Hang Down Your Head Tom Dooley

Love Like That

by Lulube








She gave ev'rything to fill your needs
Still you moped around looking sad
Was too easy leaving fa-mi-ly
Your true colors painted you bad

And...

"With a love like that
You know you should be glad"

But with guilt, you're hanging down your head
Seldom, get yourself out of bed
You turned out exactly, how I've said
Are you sorry now, that you wed?

'Cause...

"Hang down your head, Tom Dooley
Hang down your head and cry
Hang down your head, Tom Dooley
Poor boy you're bound to die"



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The lyrics that I used are in Quotation marks.
The poem has 16 lines
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