General Poetry posted April 8, 2006 Chapters:  ...5 6 -7- 8... 


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Lives after a shower in summer! In 5-7-5

A chapter in the book O My God and Mother Nature!

Summer

by Alcreator Litt Dear


Shower and breeze cool down; new lives come up, cheer up and flow fresh; all becomes dear; no summer heat. Enjoy!


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This Book of Poetry-- Nature and God's Infinite Creations in Appreciation contains poems in different structures and styles. It discovers, opens and expresses the infinite diversities of Nature, God
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This Book of Poetry O My God has poems on and about Nature and Infinite Creations of God and Gifts of God







Sands after shower!

Cheer lives, flow fresh dear; past heat

wind breeze cools summer



 



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Lesser punctuation is intentional


This is an independent chapter 7 of the book


This is a free verse poem in three phases of thoughts:
Action
Activation
Fruition


Sands = deserts; the state of a desert after a shower; what happens in a desert after a shower of rain in summer


wind breeze = a light stormy blow of cool air


Punctuation intentional


This is a free verse poem, free of uniform rhymes or meters, not a contest entry


Picture borrowed, acknowledged



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