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The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions

Is not man imperfect? Is it unnatural?


Lesser punctuation is intentional


Poetic license used


My wise readers, as you wished, I have used my poetic licence and composed this free verse poem


I have accepted your challenge and endeavoured to compose this free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables; I have availed of freedom of expression and right to expression, accepting your challenge of writing a non-contest entry, free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables and hope this free verse poem without rhymes can satisfy you



You are wise, you know, still I write, this is a free verse non-Tanka only in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables, and hope you would never misinterpret this free verse poem



This is an independent chapter 9/22 of the book



Perfect anything is unreal; to think of anything done or to expect happening or performing by man is unnatural



Some errors are natural and real for we know; to err is human that is man is never perfect; God create(s) man perfect but man chooses imperfection or turns imperfect, man is man, his pride of making of calling himself god is his limitation, for man is not divine, man is mortal, man cannot act, do or perform anything as god or like a god; history speaks man tries but never becomes god for God is God and God is Creator of man




God is perfect, naturally and by all means and terms of man's intelligence, knowledge and wisdom, and we know God create(s) man for fulfilling His purposes of creation of man; He create(s) man with some distinct limitations, for God's Creations are perfect, distinct and real; God being the only Creator of infinite creations is divine, beyond birth and death, religion free, nameless, God for fulfilling His purposes, He comes to this world as man (Godman or Man of God, Avatar or Lord) and takes birth and receives death like a man (Man of God, Godman, Avatar or Lord), with a name like man, and lives to fulfill His aims on this world and leaves the world, but God is Omnipotent (He can do anything, that is He is powerful to do anything, anytime, anywhere), God is Omniscient (He knows everything), God is Omnipresent (He can appear, present or be anywhere, anytime), and God is immortal, ageless, and almighty



To err is fate = I have used poetic licence; this means and refers to fate of man, or to mean to err is human


Day One = poetic licence used; this means and refers to Day One of Creations by God, or God's Creation on the Day One


God create(s) man perfect; man turns imperfect; man in his own interest is to save mankind and make this world better, man may try his best to live with more perfect living; part is not the whole; father is saint, son is a terrorist, who is to blame?


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