General Poetry posted April 4, 2020 Chapters:  ...8 9 -10- 11... 


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free verse

A chapter in the book Carolina Pastorals

Clouds

by estory

Like white, silken banners
unfurling into the amber
orange of sunsets

Clouds
like cotton ball balloons
rising up, up and away
into roofless skies

Clouds like clipper ships
with all of their sails set
sailing off across oceans
to London, Hong Kong,
Rio de Janeiro

Clouds becoming chrysanthemums
becoming seagulls
becoming kites
becoming windmills
becoming

Thunderheads and umbrellas

Clouds like castles
of white, limestone battlements
with crenulated walls
and soaring towers

Clouds like cities of skyscrapers
floating above prairies

Clouds
like mountains of white, chalk cliffs
and snow capped peaks
disappearing

into thin air



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I've noticed that clouds can be tremendous in North Carolina; great mountains or soaring castles of embankments, appearing out of nowhere and disappearing into nothing. So I tried to capture that ephemeral, spiritual feeling of these images in this open ended free verse poem. I wanted this to cast as wide a net as the sky and to be gradually changing, just like the clouds grow and dissipate. And to let imagination soar and sail off from those images across the globe. estory
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