Romance Poetry posted February 18, 2020


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a tanka poem

I yearn your warm touch

by Gypsy Blue Rose



 
I yearn your warm touch

and your light body on mine

when you come at night--

the moon shines through my window

ethereal silhouette



 
 




Tanka Basics: Tanka is a Japanese poem, usually about love. It's over 1000 years old. Older than haiku.

A tanka has five lines that don't usually rhyme. The first and third lines have five syllables, while the second, fourth, and fifth lines have seven. The third line usually represents a turning point in the story: reading the first three lines together gives you one image while reading the last three lines give you another.

Silhouette definition:
the outline or general shape of something. A dark image outlined against a lighter background.

ethereal definition:
light, airy, extremely delicate or refined; heavenly or celestial.


Thank you for reading my poem,

Gypsy
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