General Poetry posted December 4, 2019


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I wish

by judester

I wish
i had known her,
unfettered in sweet youth,
a free bird flying high and sure.
The brave warrior she nurtured inside.
I see the girl in my minds eye,
laughing in summer mist.
We'd be best friends,
I wish.




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Thanks to Anne for the artwork. i love my mom's stories of when she was young. i believe we would have been great friends.
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