General Poetry posted September 21, 2019


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Entertainment after dark in a NZ forest.

Away From It All

by LisaMay


A world away, the pace slows.

I dawdle as daylight dwindles –

the nocturnal cycle begins.

I belong to the night 

in my own reality show.

 

Other participants appear.

Glow worms gleam beside the track –

their pin-pricks link to the twinkling stars

as fairy lights in the dark.

 

A creature comes close… closer.

I pretend I’m a tree – roots gripping mossy rock.

Paused on mute, I watch.

A kiwi rewards me with careful trust,

then it melts amidst the ferns.

 

Reflective, 

the moon’s full-circle glow

brings illumination from above,

unplugged.

 

The acoustic night thrums with sound,

amplified to the listening ear.

Night choruses its subtle rustle and whir

as insects take the stage.

 

I handle the remote.

Changing my channel by choice, 

I am closer to home than ever, by far,

when that familiar world is removed.

 

In those distant city homes,

TV sets glare and burble 

while gourmet dinners heat up.

 

Here, I nibble my trail mix,

trudge mud and feel blessed.


 



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Author's Note:
This is another poem I wrote as a result of my recent trip to Deep Cove, on Doubtful Sound, in New Zealand's Fiordland National Park - a UNESCO World Heritage-listed Wilderness area.

Kiwis - New Zealand's most iconic native species - are small, brown, fuzzy, flightless birds about the size of a domestic chicken. They belong to an ancient group of birds that can't fly - the ratites. Kiwis are nocturnal, coming out on nightfall to forage for food. In recent years they have become endangered, due mainly to introduced predators such as dogs, cats, rats, ferrets and weasels which hunt the kiwi and eat its eggs.
Thankfully, kiwi are adaptable, and live in a wide range of habitats - from native forest and scrub to rough farmland and plantation forests, sand dunes and snowy tussocks. They especially like places where stands of trees run down to rivers in wetland vegetation. They prefer damp gullies in native forest and dense shrubland

(New Zealanders themselves have been called 'Kiwis' since the nickname was bestowed by Australian soldiers in the First World War.)
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