General Fiction posted September 16, 2019

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A dichotomy

Up in Smoke

by DonandVicki

Her blue eyes and crimson hair grabbed my attention. I followed the ringlets of her locks down to the crevasse of her bosom. I was transfixed by the paleness of her skin smattered with soft freckles.
My study was interrupted by her coquettish smile and sexy wink. She rose from her barstool and came my way. I frantically thought of something to say. Her nicotine-stained teeth and fouled breath snatched me back to brutal reality. The magic flew away.

80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry



My oh my, how quickly
dreams of lustful play
can be blown away

Up in smoke.

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