General Poetry posted August 16, 2019


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Kites

by victortouche

For three days
Just three days
of life

Could you
Could you even live
three days...

as they
were meant to be?

Dare we turn
Paradise's back
to our arms

with a smile
only evil
would use?

I smile.
Can't you smile?

It's been there
all along,

but we closed
most da doors

lest the draft
lift the kites

we were always
meant to be.






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2019


I'm very disappointed in my muse,
I actually had to work and write,
then rewrite, then change, then...
uh, I thought it might-you know-
work?
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