General Fiction posted August 15, 2019


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a frozen memory of time past

The Ribbon

by peculiar2011


I was at home, my baby and I. I was trying to open the old safe my mother had. It was given to me after she left. There was a padlock on it. I had a drawer with some old keys in it. I tried all the keys until one worked. I opened the safe; there were 3 things in it. First, a picture of my mom holding me, and she had a colorful ribbon wrap around her neck. I noticed it because of all the colors that were in it. Second, I saw the ribbon wrapped like a bow. It was beautiful. I put it in her granddaughter's hair. Third, and finally, there was a handwritten note. She wrote of a time past, of frozen memories. It seemed like it was yesterday when she was holding me in her arms. Where does the Time go?


Where Does The Time go? writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a STORY in under 600 words mentioning these things: the number 3, a baby, a padlock, a colorful ribbon.


Some memories are everlasting as if they were yesterday
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