General Poetry posted July 31, 2019


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Terza Rima

The Kingdom Conquered

by Sugarray77

I walked among the tattered horde,
their downcast faces grimly worn;
my grasp gripped firmly on my sword.

Celt’s burning kingdom was war torn
and chaos ruled defeated shires.
All hope was gone and peace forlorn.

Their dead were thrown upon tall pyres
kept burning through that gruesome night;
strange, leaden sky lit by bright fires.

Their king appeared  at pale dawn’s light,
subdued before that vicious band;
his visage bruised from bloody fight.

His golden ring rent from his hand,
the signet of his right to reign;
deposed of kingship and command.

True sovereign stripped of his domain, 
Celt kingdom lost in throes of pain.



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The Terza Rima is a form that originated in Italy. It consists of an indeterminate number of tercets, rhyming aba, where the b line of any verse sets the rhyme for the first and last lines of the next tercet. The form may end with a couplet or, more usually, with a single line. This line or couplet must rhyme with the preceding tercet's second line. In English normally written in iambic tetrameter or pentameter but this is not mandatory.


This Terza Rima poetic form is written in iambic tetrameter and in a specific rhyme scheme of aba, bcb, cdc, ded, efe, ff
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