Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 13, 2019


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A poem I wrote with jut the first two lines in mind.

I Can Sing But Cannot Dance

by patcelaw

 
I
can sing,
but can't dance.
My love runs deep
and will last for life.
It lets me live without
the regrets that many have,
helping me to live every day,
in such a way that I encourage,
to walk along with me on my journey.
A journey that says to never give up.
As I hold tightly to my faith
in my Lord and my Savior,
trusting Him to carry
me each troubled day
along life's way
'til I know
He loves
me.


-Patricia Lawrence
6-13-19



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A syllable count poem with the following counts, 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
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