General Poetry posted May 31, 2019


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34 syllables contest

My Happy Place

by Chip Kuzborski

rusty but trusty old ferry
transporting my weary feet and soul
to that sweet untethered terra
where I surrender to island time



34 Syllables writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem on any topic and in any format. But it must have 34 syllables total. No more, no less.

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#2886
2019


island time:
The time vacuum created by the ocean's presence. Similar to stoner's time, everything moves nice and slow. This carefree aura even has the ability to travel with islanders and can engulf you in its presence.

I put this into the 'romance' category for the love affair I have with the ferry and its destination.
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