Self Improvement Poetry posted April 27, 2019


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Our Dreams

by patcelaw

It
Seems all our
dreams washed away by waves
out to the sea of forgetfulness
leaving us feeling like we never did exist 

as we came to the seashore we found
that our dreams were still there
renewing
love.
I'm
glad we came
to the seashore again
to put our love together once more
making for us many more lasting, loving years
to have and hold just as we had pledged
the day when we had wed
years ago
dear.

-Patricia Lawrence
4-25-16



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This is a spaceship format. I created the format several years ago, It has the following syllable count and is centered on the page to create the spaceship form
1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1.
I hope that others will try the format. It is really not as hard as one would think.
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