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A chapter in the book The Gift of Life Book # Two (2019)

Comfort Me Please?

by Ricky1024


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"Comfort Me Please?"
Written on April 8th, 2019
By Jason Richard Smrkovsky
Copyright C. Fan Story 2019
"All Rights Reserved"

"Won't you comfort Me?"
"It hurts so bad I can no longer see?"
My minds unclear and there's nothing but darkness here?"
"Can't you see?"
"Comfort Me?"
...
"Won't you help Me?"
"Ice seemed to have lost...
"Have lost the only Me?"
"Try so hard but there's just unending pain and Misery?"
"Won't You comfort Me?"
...
"Oh, yes...
"There goes the light?"
"They're coming now?"
"Coming now for me!"
"But why God?"
"Comfort Me?"
...
"Why?"
"Did I not try to please?"
"Why?"
"Did I catch a disease?"
...
"The Coffins Lid is now Closed!"
"Darkened Clouds gather over head...
"Check My Pulse please?"
"I think I may be Dead?"
...
"Why God?"
"Why?"
"Did...
"I...
*Die?"



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